Reviews for The Throne Wars
Midnight Lost chapter 3 . 6/9
Ah, poor Sasuke... well, not really. Dumbass should have known to stay with his team.

Wonder how the others are going to get the Emo King out of this one.

Also looking forward to some more Anko and Naruto fluff time, love those two. Though wouldn't be opposed to a few more drunken experiences with Kurenai.

Anyways, looking forward to when you come around and update this again.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/26
Please update it been long time and I really enjoy this story.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/22
hope you update this story
Guest chapter 3 . 4/17
Hope this story is updated more often.
draculyn28 chapter 3 . 4/5
very good story, I hope to see what happens later, greetings.
f.rahman1302 chapter 3 . 4/1
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Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 3/19
Several stories that many would like to read and they're all a few chapters or less before dropped. Really damn frustrating.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/21
He should use misstress clause more often thing about it was her who changed his life the most he own her to much. She help thing with knowing the planes of others. She is the beast character to tease naruto hope. She with a way to keep the grail safe and hiden no one can get it. Hope she gives him something hide with him no one can take it from like the gate of Babylon or have keep for him.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
Hope naruto leaves the village
Guest chapter 3 . 2/21
Hope the uchia dies. Naruto should have the holy grail hiden in the gate of Babylon or have mistress clause keep for him. He could also have it infused with himself.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/20
Hope Santa clause give naruto gate of Babylon to put the grail and it would be the safes pulse in the world. This would be interesting to see and she could tease naruto more and get him to do something perverted to get as a extra gift she saved for him but did not give him right away. Love the story hope it updates often. He can summon Scáthach she is the ultimate teacher she is way better then anko.
helrio uzugaku chapter 3 . 2/17
Gotta admit I didn't see this story coming. It's more fast paced in comparison to keys to the kingdom and bashing is much more prevalent. Not a very bad thing under the circumstance it isn't taken too far. You though have some obvious hate for Iruka. I admit I'm curious about it, Sasuke can suck a song for all I care, bash the little shit to the ninth circle of hell.

Unique start to the fic, I honestly haven't seen one start on christmas day before so that was a pleasant twist! Also Santa claus, the jokes were a bit stale and executed the wrong way but I saw what you were going for.

Be straight with me, this story was inspired by Neonzangetsu's own Naruto x fate stay crossover 'a most unlikely card' right? I I've read most of his work and gotta say you use the idea very well.

You got any other ideas for how to use Mistress claus to battle? I'd imagine her as a mage class heroic spirit because of her casual casting of spells. Dropping a bag of coal on her opponent's head could be funny. But I can also see her being an assassin because of her lore of never being seen. Messing up Naruto's enemies day by burying their sleeping forms in coal would be hilarious to write about I'd imagine. Just as an Omame or something to take the edge off a serious situation and not to be taken too aggressively.

Having her in his corner is seriously cheating in all the best way. "What did Kakashi get when he was seven santa?" "Why he asked me for his teammate's three sizes my young master~" or just funny blackmail like that.

"Santa, did Hiashi hyuuga always have that troll face of his or does he make that face on purpose?" Just something to give a laugh every once in a while.

You really need an artist for this unique content you bring to your fics. Female Santa claus, alter keyblade for Naruto in keys to the kingdom. New looks for the Naruto's from you different fics. Yeah, you definitely need someone from deviant art.

Gotta say, I like this almost as much as keys to the kingdom. Can't wait for you to update more, I'll also be checking out other bits of your work and encourage others to do the same.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/8
Hope you update soon love your story. Hope you update gold king also I really like your Naruto and type moon crossover. He should summon sachan the queen of shadow she is a great teacher that can help naruto improve greatly. I really want to see santa again.
AlernateReality chapter 3 . 2/7
This story is a bit too over the top. The bashing of characters, Naruto being OOC, it makes it hard to read. I'd recommend going back and toning down these issues and it will make for a better read.
IGT chapter 3 . 2/6
I loved this "filler" chapter with surprising ending and Ameyuri Ringo
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