"...Linus's finances..." The rhyme had me cracking up.

Mary - that is a mystery and I'm looking forward to more about this - nicely worded with plenty of Miles - I adore his snarkiness.

Good chapter!

Loving this! I can't wait for more!

Awesome work. Especially the Juliet's POV is great.
I wish you could edit this and make it easier to read, breaking it into paragraphs/chapters. Walls of text are super difficult to read on a screen, and this actually has a lot of potential and it's so well written. Anyway, I appreciated your work so far :-)

Loved this...the "what happened during the 2 weeks " explanation