Reviews for Who Was Over Last Night?
luvnanofate chapter 1 . 1/22
Ha Ha Ha! That is just too cute. Thanks, this brightened my day.
Jay
narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
That was so cute. Keep up the good work. Ruby and Weiss forever.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
Nice!
Wait, if ruby is commenting about her silver eyes, does that mean we’ll see Maria aka Grimm Reaper come into this? Her dialogue is just as quirky as Ruby’s, if you know what I mean? Ie, sweet?!
Since this au is kinda based on My Princess, where beacon never fell, right? I feel that Maria or some mention of Maria could do in a short. Maybe? Or even the squabble between Qrow and Winter? I think Maria, Qrow and ruby (and now her daughter!) would be fun to see... cause they all take something from one another.
Merry Christmas!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
All praise for this one, nice short story!
More of these, please! They’re cute!
Notes: Some people never change, including Ruby’s hype. Also, is it dumb to ask what colour their daughter represents? Has it been mentioned somewhere before?
And am I the only one to realise the trick between chapter breaks? When the kid was shouting mamma I had my heart in my mouth that she saw, but it was in the morning so, phew...
But when she talked about it later...
Aww maaan! Lol
IanAlphaAxel chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
Wonderful story!
Combine117 chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
*chuckles, because I don't know how to write a chuckle.*

Little Eira doesn't know why Santa Claus was with Ruby and to be honest, she wouldn't want to know until she's older.
snoopykid chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
Lmao that was good. Poor ruby, being put down like that not once but twice. Awesome job!
Pikatwig chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
This was a cute and sweet little story. I like to see some sweet White Rose stories and this didn't disappoint. I like how Eira questioned what was up with Weiss in the costume. Very clever thinking on the excuse on Ruby's part.

And... little funny story. Me and a pal worked on our own RWBY Christmas story that had a White Rose daughter... and she called Ruby and Weiss the exact same things that your version did. That's a really funny coincidence.

Overall, cute, silly, sweet, and fun. Nice work. Also, Merry Christmas.