I am bad with reviews but I wanted to say that this is really good and I love this Fanfiction. I really hope that there will be a new chapter soondon’t want to rush you or anything,just wanted to say I am really exited for more). Keep going on like this!

...still the same boring ass crap with the same annoying as fuck use of road. its wasn't funny or cute the first time. now its just fucking stupid.

...yeah in no universe would Garp accept this. He was barely able to hold back in helping Ace and then actually did help him by allowing Luffy to beat him. The fact he is ok with the WG going after Luffy is because Luffy chose to become a pirate and actually set out to sea. Here his grandson is 14...if you're saying well Garp allows innocent 14 year olds to die or be enslaved and raped everyday then you are correct and he's a terrible person for it. But there's a difference even for a terrible person as garp between random ass unknown 14 year olds and his own grandson.

the use of "for oda's sake" is fucking annoying as hell and takes you right out of the story. its also not funny.

At least Luffy is now with a few people that don't want to rip him apart! And at least Ace and the WBs know that something weird is going on with Shanks, that's a start. Poor Luffy. I hope you are doing well.

i humbly thank you for this wonderful story!
you succeed in made me crying for Luffy, i wish Luffy meet Ace asap tho, he is just a kid, hiks.
oh, by the way, i wonder if later when everything settle down, will Luffy became a pirate with his canon nakama?
ps. i wish you healthy!

Cookie-chan...! So I am finally here to review and I must say that once again you keep writing awesome chapters oqbeosgdoeh your imagination never ceases to amaze mee, I was screaming so much with Lucci Luffy confrontation you write them so well and in character ! The action parts of this chapter were GOLD and THIS ENDING OMG ! You already know how excited I am for this story and how much I love you ! keep going my awesome talented writer i love you oceans*tight huggos around my precious and funny friend*

Luffy, you're clearly inside a slave trader ship. And Rob Lucci, he appears again. Garp or Dragon, please, for the love of Luffy, please do something about that man! And Ace! This is no time to dilly-dallying! Your brother needs you! All that sneezing is because Luffy is thinking about you! And Shanks, do inform the brocon (I'm not sure if Ace here will be a brocon but in canon, he's very protective of Luffy; who can blame him, Luffy is the type to make people worry about him) about the news.
Thank you for the great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one! Stay healthy and stay safe wherever you are!

The animals are so cool! Are they headed to sabaody (sp?) to sell the animals? I hope you up date again pretty soon, I can't wait till Ace and Luffy are together again.

I can't wait for Ace to find Luffy! Or the other way around. Great story! I like how it's going so far.

I'm crying. TT. TT Ace where are you?! Help Luffy! Luffy will be save right? Right?! TT. TT

Loved this chapter! I love how Luffy keeps evading Lucci lol. I also loved seeing Shanks and what he was doing. The amount of people in One Piece who would go nuts if anything ever happened to Luffy...Also, I need Ace to find out about what’s going on! Ah I’m stressed for poof Luffy

Hi, I love your story so much. You do a fantastic job keeping true to the characters while throwing them into different situations. I've reread the whole story a couple times now and I cant wait for the next chapter!

While I sure wish you were doing wonderful the whole world turned upside down this year so not too badly is gonna have to do and trust me I feel you my life as been a mess this last year I was hoping 2020 would bring some good with it but no! Oh well it’s never all bad I’ll be waiting for more to this story and hopefully to hear you’ve been improving in your health!

Awesome update! I hope Luffy helps them all!