| Reviews for The Hyena Lion |
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   lilsanddune chapter 22 . 3/4 what a way to end it |
| arthur.brunotte chapter 22 . 3/1 "Janja and Janja also gotten married" Wow, Janja sure is narcissistic, marrying himself. Also, I would like to point out this chapter, particularly the reunion between Kion and his family, felt REALLY rushed. I know there wasn't a lot of time left to finish this story, but there could've at least been one more chapter, or even just by making this chapter longer, to give the reunion all the emotion it deserves. |
| Balto2wolfquest chapter 22 . 3/1 A beautiful end to a beautiful story |
| arthur.brunotte chapter 21 . 2/27 "Kion and Usaliri stared at each other as the fierce battle went on between his friends and the ones he have called family for his whole life. "Every choice made," Usailti snarls. The two opponents. were glaring at each other as Kion vowed to stop the pride lands from being taken over. The thundered erupted from behind the two as the volcano not so far away. "Has led to this." Not hesitating, Kion unsheathed his claws as he felt everything; light and darkness. The atmosphere making the young lion much darker than originally. To him, she must be stop even if he have to kill her. Usaliti roared and charged him as he on and Usaliri stared at each other as the fierce battle went on between his friends and the ones he have called family for his whole life. "Every choice made," Usailti snarls. The two opponents. were glaring at each other as Kion vowed to stop the pride lands from being taken over. The thundered erupted from behind the two as the volcano not so far away. "Has led to this." Not hesitating, Kion unsheathed his claws as he felt everything; light and darkness. The atmosphere making the young lion much darker than originally. To him, she must be stop even if he have to kill her. Usaliti roared and charged him as he countered." Hmmm... |
| arthur.brunotte chapter 18 . 2/16 This chapter was... confusing. |
| arthur.brunotte chapter 17 . 2/12 "Kion knew his father wouldn't mind if he came home past dawn because he wouldn't do anything foolish and go behind his father's back." Who is Kion's father here? It isn't Simba, since they haven't seen each other for years. Also, what's the song used in this chapter? |
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/9 I wonder what Janja is going to do? |
| Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 13 . 1/30 Looks good |
| Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 11 . 1/26 Looks good |
| Wolf heart 22 chapter 11 . 1/24 this is interesting. Seeing how everyone is feeling. |
| Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 10 . 1/21 Looks good |
| Jzak98 chapter 10 . 1/21 Great chapter! Can’t wait for the next! |
| RyanSquad chapter 9 . 1/18 PG-13 due to high language and some worth dark themes. |
| Arika Koski chapter 9 . 1/18 If this fanfic was a film would it rated PG or rated PG-13 or rated R? |
| Jzak98 chapter 8 . 1/15 Awesome chapter! Poor kion is so scared of Simba |
