Nice wrap up. Thanks for hanging in there and getting it done. It was a fun read.

Great to see they sorted it out before it went too far astray. Nicely done.

Awww, such a lovely family! Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story and for the fluff it had within. Fantastic work!

They've admitted their love! Woot Woot! Beautiful chapter and story!

huy zorro tarado yo de judi lo hago sufrir pero bueno ni modo jaja hay pobrecito el otro

ese crio salio al padre

Well, I rushed the story its true. I am sorry about thar, but I didn't have more ideas for her and I don't wanted to have an unfinished story. Some will like some don't.

If I disappointed you, I am sorry about it. Next time will be more carefully, like I am doing with my pirate story. I pretend to finish her, but when I have some good ideas.

Anyway, I decided to post this commentary for let you know that I know that I my have disappointed some of you. But, I really kind love this story and the end of her.

See you next time.

Ok, I was hoping for some detailed fluff from the night in question.

Doubly disappointed.
You might as well written 700 pages of someone thinking about their crush, buying flowers, a suit, making reservations, then cutting and saying "then we dated, got married and had kids...the end"

An emotional and beautiful ending to an emotional and beautiful story. Thank you!

I loved the rest... but the end had no payoff at all.

I'll watch for the epilogue but this is disappointing as an ending.

Follow her, Nick! Dont lose out on catching Judy!

creo que tener un novio con ese genio mejor piensa judi cielos

Oh dear, that could have gone better. Too much uncertainty on both sides and things are falling apart, for now.

A big buildup and the suspense is killing me. Nicely done.

Way to stir the pot Mira. Good chapter!