Oooo fascinating new twist. I was wondering what the outcome of the bite would be. I’m glad you didn’t kill her off last chapter as I feel like there is more story to be told. I’m looking forward to it!

Side note- will you be continuing the Seth spinoff story too? It was such a great story as well!

Love it! ;-)

Whaaaaat?! Oh don’t leave us hanging! This is torturous.

Love it! ;-)

Loving this story so far, can't wait to read more!;-)

No, Alice can’t see Renesmee at all in her visions. That was just something the movie messed up. There was never any hint in the book that Alice could see Renesmee.

Alice shouldn’t be able to see Renesmee anyway. She can only see humans and vampires, not a hybrid like Renesmee.

Yayayayayayay! You’re back! I’m so happy! And I’m happy to learn you will be finishing these stories. I have been trying to distract myself with other stories, but they just weren’t the same caliber. goodness and because of you, I have officially become hooked in the Jake/Nessie and Seth/OC stories. Can’t wait to find out what the creature is from this cliffhanger!

Really enjoying the story so far! Keep up the good work! I really like Jacob’s POV but i guess who doesn’t and looking forward to seeing how Nessie’s gift will evolve! Thank you

Awww I liked it! And I loved Old Quil’s statement haha, white wolf! So great. And I’m SO HAPPY to hear about your passion for the Seth story line. I’m addicted as well. Great job!

Treaty discussion should be interesting!

Aw very sweet proposal!

Just reach the last chapter, I like very much your story, hope you can update soon, it's a good story

Really great story so far, but would love for you to be mindful of story continuity. He had already told her before that he thought he loved her mom.

Aw I thought it was good! I say the next chapter should be fully in Jacob’s POV!