I enjoyed reading your fan-fic up to this point and am looking forward to future updates on your telling of Adam's story. Also this is just a guess but whoever Adam is partnered with he will become the leader of his team and then revealing his name. I'm thinking he was given Branwen as his cover name starting some drama with the sister's But that's just a guess. Anyway's hope you and yours are doing well in the pandemic, Take Care!

Hmm, that looks interesting, there are so few stories centrated on Adam, I'm glad there's someone else trying to turn him into a real character instead of the stupid cartoon I saw in volumes 4-6. To be honest I was very disappointed with the latest volume of RWBY so much that I'm not even sure I want to watch the series (when you realize that fanfictions are better at both character development and story development than the actual series you start realy lose interest). Anyway, your your story caugh my attention and I'm sure it will develop interestingly.
PS. My favorite character is Weiss, she is the last rational character, and the evolution of her character is the best (only best) by far.
Goodbye, and stay safe.

Best teammates... Feel like Blake would be a mixed bag there. Too much shared history. Literally anyone else would be interesting, especially Weiss(assuming she could survive long enough to have a heart-to-heart). As a consequence of Adam's upbringing I've noticed he has only seen the worst humanity has to offer with very little of the good. So his views and beliefs will be somewhat challenged no matter who he ends up on a team with and require some refinement.

Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.

As for Adam's name... Only one that makes "some" sense to me is Belladonna but yeah. Doesn't feel right and can't think of anything else that would pull out the reaction you wrote. Unless he was named after a dog, in which case... x)

Thanks for writing, you did a pretty good job. Saw some grammar mistakes but wouldn't have thought you were still in high school lol

My only complaint would be that you dumped his adopted siblings to the side too soon, you had something good going on there(might get why you did it though, they would be difficult to write into current events).

I thought this was dead, glad it’s not dead yet. Hopefully you’re doing okay. Good luck.

I look forward to how this story pans out. Cheers and stay safe!

this is an interesting story so far! I like the swapping out of pyrrha and yang in the emerald forest scene with Jaune and Adam's descent to what we saw on the show is quite realistic in this story too. Thanks for sharing and update soon!

Star Fletchers.

I really hope that she isn't some kind of hallucination.

Great story love it but where are the questions

Though conversation between Goodwitch and Ozpin disapprove it of course lol.

You know, I'm kinda sure that Blake is just a facet of his imagination and Adam is descending into insanity. Of course unless there is interaction between other main cast and her.

I hereby dub thee... Aka Buru~ Go forth in the name of Blake's ass~

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Pretty funny chapter, curious to see the new team placement. Good work.

Honestly the whole relationship of Blake and Adam seems to be forced and toxic for both of them. In my opinion they should break up and find other romantic partners

Adam got partnered with Blake and Yang with Jaune...
So you removed Pyrrha. So the teams would probably be Ruby, Weiss, Adam, Blake. This is gonna be interesting...