Great chapter I love the fanfiction since I started reading it yesterday. I hope you are able to update like 1 chapter every two days or something since this is amazing.

So I’ve been binge reading this fic the last couple of days and I’m about to say something very controversial.

I’m starting to enjoy this fic more than the actual show. Yeah, I said it. SUE ME!

This story corrects almost all grips I have with the show. Izuku getting more screen time with the girls(Yaoyorozu and Jiro being my personal favorites), Bakugo being put in his place and being served a BIG slice of humble pie, Izuku receiving proper training for combat and One For All, this fic nails all of it.

Let’s talk about Enso for a minute. Something about him just fits, like he belongs in My Hero Academia. His presence doesn’t take away from the story at all and he is definitely the more mature one in a classroom filled with eccentric heroes in training while at the same time, having some quirky and funny moments himself. Despite him seeming overpowered, I like it. It’s original, it doesn’t make the other characters feel less powerful, and overall, I think Enso is a welcome addition to the fandom.

Now onto the harem aspect. Writing a harem is a bold choice because it’s not everyone’s cup of tea. In my opinion, I thinks it’s great and I might be biased because I’m like harem fics but like I said earlier, seeing Izuku have more screen time with the girls makes this fic incredibly satisfying to read.

I can’t wait to read more. Keep up the good work you’re doing great!

Enso is definitely one of my favorite characters and I am glad you have provide him these interactions that flesh him out as this oddly charming and awkward guy who just makes this story standout. Like seeing Best Jeanist taking a different approach this time around, honestly I like how you are handling Bakugo’s problems as it something that I feel the manga just glossed over. Stain is someone I hope we see more of because he a interesting one that is for sure. Also I really want to see more of the others at their internships because that is a massive highlight of the anime.

Heya! I just found this story of yours and I am really loving it! So many fanfics just have self-inserts or follow the story line so rigidly with only a single difference that doesn't really impact the original story line or has no originality whatsoever. The story of Enso and Lynch and the repercussions of it really give your story the boost it needs to be in my favourite list. I'm actually starting to think Lynch might be Midoriya's father, considering the analytical fanfic has a nice combination of new story elements alongside the original story. Its seriously interesting and I hope to see more from it soon.

And now some critiques unfortunately, but at least they are minor in the grand scheme of the story. Maybe your other reader's enjoy it, but I don't for the reasons that follow.
When you use Japanese words like 'nani', "sugoi' and other stuff, is seriously cringey. This is my view, so others may see it differently, but transposing anime elements or cliches into text form doesn't go well. It comes across as awkward and forced. It can also detract from the atmosphere of the scene, like Bakugou suddenly saying 'nani' when he's angry. Using English would be better there. In a humorous section, its fine but it's still awkward and forced.
Also, sometimes your OC is inconsistent. Suddenly acting like a cat doesn't doesn't fit his character. Enso's character is very well done, and very well-developed, along with his relationship with Nezu and Midoriya, but beware having him do uncharacteristic things for the sake of humor. He's been plenty funny without needing that.
But these are seriously minor critiques. You've built the characters and the relationships very well. Please keep writing! I look forward to future chapters!

Pikaboo73 thanks for this new chapter and good job man. Btw I have a request for you, I don't mind if you want to take the request or not it's your story after all.
Can you at please update the 84th chapter of this story. I already read your original story back in Wattpad.
As we all know we already in the Summer camp arc and you gave us the 83th chapter by surprise to celebrate your half rewritten story. I'm sorry if I push you to much it's just not everyone expect you continue the story from where you stop plus the showdown between Deku and Muscular is about to begin. I bet many reader right now are dying to read it. I mean it's one of the Deku's best fight and with Ikari in his disposal it will be ROUGH.
But that doesn't mean you have to do it quickly, take your time as much do you need after all it's took you 3 month to publish a new chapter while rewriting old chapter and updating your other fic. Also enjoy your time watching Svtfoe series, it's a great series I watched that show too.I just really hope you manage to publish before the end of this year. Again sorry if it felt like I pushing you.

Y'know the thing that I like about this story is that the reference of other Pop culture always been brought up by Enso in hilarious way. I really appreciate and hope you will keep this good shot happen. Btw have ever thought that Enso should tell Izuku some story of his Multiverse adventure?

Well, I suddenly found myself in Lynch's dungeon for no reason, just a minute ago I removing myself from your little house stunt back in the pokemon world and next thing you know I came here. Am I a world traveller like Enso? We will never know.

But damn after finding out you had written 80 over chapters on this, I literally binged the entire thing and I am craving for more even though it's a little cringy at times. Hell, you may even convince me to create an account and start writing fanfics...oh right the review, totally forgot this was a review.

So that was a very interesting cliffhanger to leave us off on, even though I have travelled to the future and know everything, it's still fun to see the amount of work you put into satisfying everyone. Having more flashes of Enso's backstory is really fun too. Although there is one issue I have with the story, where are my class B boys, I feel like Class B is way too underrated so if you have time you could maybe add them into the story? I know Kendo's already a harem member but idk the other girls could be interesting characters to write.

BRUH WE FUCKING SHARE BIRTHDAYS! I've forgotten if I left a review on this so I'll just remind you that your work is a splendid addition to this archive! Hope you had a great birthday, from one guy to another.

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

thanks for the chapter man, really good work as always.

Goblin Slayer story
Harem pairing

Need moar!

KO awesome chapter, well things for the young heroes in training are getting interesting in a unique way but it looks like the weird feeling Enso has been getting is about the danger that is coming them.

I can see the pattern here. Younger girls get attract to Izuku while Older woman get attract to Enso.

Even though that's how it works can at least Miruko end up in Izuku's harem.

Congratulations! You manage to rewrite half of the original chapter. You are surely one of a kind, most of writer wouldn't rewrite this many chapter.

I just really really hope you will continue this MARVELOUS story. PLUS ULTRA!