I've been really enjoying this rewrite so far! I love the addition of Ahsoka and the meet up with Han Chewie. I'm not a huge fan of how the sequels were handled, but I am fond of its characters, so it's lovely to see a rewrite that doesn't make any huge changes to Rey, Finn co. I am fairly curious as to how you will handle Finn, whether he will be force sensitive or not, if he'll get with any of his 4 potential love interests- Heh, I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Thank you for such a delightful read, you clearly care a lot about this franchise and have a passion storytelling! I'm excited for where this fic is going

Hi there nice update

Great job making Ashoka's personality. How is she still alive? How is she still young?

Hi thanks for the update, I was wondering how long Rey as been with Ashoka on the Falcon by this point, the thing about the outer rim is, planets are very far apart and it takes a while to travel. Something the movies never do a good job of explaining, any way nice way to introduce those two.

Happy to see Han and Chewie back, but I guess I'd gotten over the relationship between Ahsoka and Anakin because that one didn't quite hit me with the feels. On hte other hand, I kind of expected Ahsoka to react stronger to Chewie than Han, seeing as he's the one that we actually saw meet her in the Clone Wars.

Hi! I'm really enjoying the story so far. I wanted for Ashla to be Ahsoka so bad When you were describing her in her intro. I was really excited When she usted her lightsabers the first time.

I am really liking how you are working with the characters and the world. Mainly Rey, whi feels more human in this story than in canon to me.

Thank you for starting this story! Following!

Oh YES, the First Order is now a credible threat filled with capable soldiers and noble demons rather than an endless font of white or silver cannon fodder, Darth Emo and Finn. I am suitably outraged for the Duath's deaths though.

The fight was wonderful and you reminded me of psychometry, so I'd say this chapter hit it out of the park!

The side trip, as it were, definitely serves to expand and develop the characters. And I’m an “official” story that desperately lacks character development, it makes things better.
You were right about the fact that Rey had too many loose leads and too many unexplained coincidences.

This was a surprise to be sure, but a welcome one! I love every single one of your changes! Of all the rewrites I’ve read, this one has to be my favorite! A question I had is that will this end with Finnrey or will Poe and Finn get together. I don’t care what happens but I’m kinda invested in Finnrey. It’s a minor part of the story, I know. Anyways whatever happens I’m sure it’ll be great!

I usually don't review stuff but I got to say this.

I started reading this story yesterday and I absolutely love it. The details of the scenery and such made it easy for me to visual the scene and the characters themselves. I seen the new trilogy a couple of times (I was on deployment and that's all they played for a month straight), and despite that I feel like Im being introduced to the characters for the first time with this story. Honestly this really inspired me to work harder on my star wars story.

Keep up the good work.

"Don't recite the Declaration at me, Captain: I helped write it." This. This line right here. It's the perfect encapsulation of the role Ahsoka's going to play and I LOVE IT. And the "innacuracies" were perfect world-building so there's no problems there at all.

can't wait to see luke, leila, r2d2, han, chewie, 3po, and lando again.

Well half of the fun in Star Wars is meeting new peoples and seeing new places so I, for one, enjoy Duath very much.

this is so good! personally i hope Rey will eventually make a double bladed lightsaber, since it would be similar to a bo-staff like the one Rey uses at the beginning of the story, anyway sorry for getting offtrack but still this story is amazing so keep it up