Reviews for A Deer, A Fox and an Unexpected Journey
FreakyFreek chapter 21 . 9/28
So this protags a hollow that gets with apachi first, the others a fullbringer that gets with mila. Will you consider making a third that's either quincy that gets with sung sung first then we can complete the Trifecta. Of course there's also Hali belle but that's your choice obviously.
viacheslavlopatskiy chapter 14 . 9/27
Dropped on the bisexual part. It simply came out of nowhere. Not a hint in the past, no development - nothing. Just because. As if it was done to simply to score additional points from LGBTQ community. To describe a MC who acts strictly hetero with possible future polygamic relations (Ying and Yang) and then out of the blue go like "Oh, he's also bi" is rather shoddy writing. If you so want to make him so - do put some effort into establishing it.
leydemo chapter 21 . 8/6
Very good
Siegfrized chapter 11 . 3/1
Its late but why mc soo loose on his past
Valiryo chapter 1 . 2/28
“wild blond hair” .. “deep blue cerulean eyes”
you forgot the whisker marks on his cheeks..
Mr. Marston chapter 21 . 2/23
Great update. With the coming storm they're going to need all the help they can get even with an organized army. Hope some of the Shinigami dealt with at fake Karakura actually survived and rejoin the fight as allies more or less. Keep them coming as always! 10/10.
Magi Mari chapter 1 . 2/22
The bisexual thing made me stop reading
Lightblade23 chapter 20 . 2/20
Great story I did thought there wouldve been lemons written in some chapters with how it was just described over. But a shame to that, anyway your story is great a shame it doesn't have that many followers.
Also check for the translations of the attacks.
la escisa del viento – Wind Scythe (Guadaña de viento (correct))

arpón claro – light harpoon. (arpón de luz (correct.))

lanzando un aluvión ligero – spearing light barrage ( Ráfaga de Luz (correcto)) the spearing part can't be translated as in Spanish there is no direct translation. The correct one wouldn't use the spearing word. It would use penetrante (piercing) that would make Ráfaga de luz penetrante (piercing light barrage) making it into something that can be translated.

Those are the correct translations from English to Spanish.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 12 . 2/18
Good work!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 11 . 2/18
Awesome chapter!
Mr. Marston chapter 20 . 2/15
Seriously, for being a cold and professional assassin Soifon sure has bad control over her temper. Still this was quite the chapter, the intense fights and revelations really made this one. Keep them coming, the aftermath of the war is sure to be interesting to say the least. 10/10.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 10 . 2/14
Another great chapter! Looks like it’s off to Las Noches and Aizen...

I can only hope that Yoshiro will somehow be able to protect his loved ones from Aizen’s deception...
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 9 . 2/14
Good chapter! Lol. Poor Di Roy. Always the weak link in the Hollow chain.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 8 . 2/14
Wow! Close call! But hey! It worked. I especially liked how Yoshiro left that song on his music played as a final "middle finger" to the Soul Reapers. Lol. That was classic.

So it seems Yoshiro is now in Hueco Mundo! Although now that he has no choice but to feed on Hollows...will he eventually Hollowfy and become one himself? What about Halibel, Mila Rose, Sung-Sun, and Apacci? Will Yoshiro reunite with them?! Here’s to hope!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 7 . 2/14
Dang! So close yet so far! Yoshiro will need to be clever about this one. And seeing as he’s a human, I doubt the Soul Society will kill him (unless Mayuri or Aizen get their hands on him)...
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