I enjoyed this it started to feel very rushed tho. Not a massive issue but something to be conscious of in the future. :) now as for bl3 if you make a sequel do not kill off maya like that or I will throw your own fluster cuck grenade at you... .

hate the raaks, they're a nightmare

good story I look forward to what's next.

I love the premise of the story, the powers, and characters. Sadly the story is going to fast, and is too poorly written for me. If this was rewritten And beta’d I would love to read this but as it is, i can’t continue reading this

I have to say I loved this. it had me laughing and I could honestly see the expressions in my mind as to how the characters acted.

I hope that there may be more in the future, what with BL3.

That said, I could see another ending with every surviving VH, plus the raiders kicking voldies ass to the point of him pulling a jack. aka the point that you kill him in-game with him ranting and raving while struggling to move due to injuries. then boom bullet to the brain.

What a lovely 3 endings to a book that I have read several times now... Well not now to reread it again!

thanks for the chapter but this ending kinda felt rushed.
well anyway.
This is/was a great read and i hope to see/read more from you author.

I love this story I love Pandora honestly I love tiny Tina but I would of loved Angel with him as well she's just bae and we all love her love how he just conquered Wizards easily

Love It!

I need more mayhem! This is sooo good, and finally Claptrap appeared, since you started to present the CR I was waiting the moment when Claptrap made his debut, and it was glorious, I just wanted that he tried more of his sheniengans, like calling the students minions

just caught up to the end of the posted chapters.

I dislike the monogamous relationship going on in Pandora. I'm pretty sure tannis had several times cheated on her partners or was in polyamorous relationships. (with multiple voice box recorders).

She's not alone in that idea, however I do really like how many of the canon relationships are maintained. Only wish that the obvious parings being written are more fluid. *Angel* and *the mechamancer* could easily be with Harry too.

Luna was someone I would have thought would join Harry's lovenest too. Since both her and Tina are able to understand eachother due to their shared burdens of sight. As well as their sense of propriety.

I'm excited for the last few chapters.

Only frustration is that the story feels like a crack fic. The pacing is all over the place and interactions feel more comical than sincere.

However, if read as a crack fix, the above issues are actually normal. Therefore nothing needs to be changed as it is really good as is.

while I feel the story is rather choppy and lacks... realistic behavior in many respects. It's hilarious and fun to read!

The vault hunter behaviour is never touched on in the game, but their reaction to beaten and starved Harry is not entirely something I expected. I was actually expecting a lack of understanding for the majority of it. Maybe only Moxxie and Tina understanding what's going on at the beginning.

Other than a rather tame interpretation of Vault hunter insanity, I really felt that the story was almost entirely canon compliant.

Can't wait for more!

Thanks for the chapter. Looks like you are getting real close to the story climax. Can't wait to see where and how you take this story.

Harry is nailing those fat cats to the wall using there own laws. hell voldies moldy ass is expecting an ass kicking and Angel gets her much deserved vengeance against Jack, and Harry pulls a final fuck you to the man by basically stealing his company

Damn this was awesome but I hope that this isn't the sign of the end of this story. The fun you could have going into the rest of the years of HP while also running with the path towards borderlands 3 would be a great story~ Keep up the great work!