| Reviews for An Open Secret |
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Den Scurman chapter 4 . 5/23 And now this is complete. A fully armed and operational fanfiction. Very nice way to tie up everything. You actually managed to pull out a lot and tie it all together into a fulfilling ending in only 4 chapters. It usually takes me like 10, and I can't even get the feels done right like you can. And the Kwamis at the end was an expected but nice touch. It's been forever since I was able to follow a story from publishing to completion, but your unique premise and clean style really made this worth reading. Keep up the good work. |
Captain Meowvel chapter 3 . 5/14 Wow! A lot happened in this chapter! If I was Alya, this stuff would be driving me nuts too! It nevers seems to be easy with these two, huh? XD Poor kids. Anywho, I'm excited to see them get together next chapter :3 |
Captain Meowvel chapter 2 . 5/14 They really aren't being subtle at all. Hahaha! Gotta love Plagg being so over all this identity stuff. I don't blame him! Another cute chapter. Onward I go! |
Captain Meowvel chapter 1 . 5/13 Ooh! I'm enjoying this so far. I really like your writing! There were lots of great similes and metaphors that made me go "ooh". And I really like the idea you had with the pen - how their sudden Ladynoir dynamic gave it away. I'm curious as to how Mari figured out he's Chat Noir. I imagine that'll be addressed, so I'll just have to read on tomorrow and see (or rather, read on later today, since it's 4am lol). Anyway, great work! :D |
MyIndy13 chapter 4 . 5/8 Oh. My. Gosh. I. Love. It. Two things: Most people use commas incorrectly, but I think you’re doing fabulous! This is the sweetest fic I’ve read in forever! *Swoon. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/23 awww that last bit with tiki and plagg is to die for, its SO CUTE! this whole story is amazingly cute and well written! good job :) 3 |
writeringoodfaith chapter 4 . 4/17 This was amazing! I especially have to point out how much I loved Marinette's speech on selfishness. It was so clever and well done. The characterisation was so thorough and deep. My favourite part of the story was probably the introduction of Adrien as someone already half in love with Marinette and her awkwardness and that whole smitten kitten phase. Also, so sorry to hear about your injury during one of you A/Ns! I hope you're ok. Your writing is still amazing and thank you so much for finishing this fic! |
Dragon Lord Draco chapter 4 . 4/3 wait is this the end? nooooo |
LikeaLemming chapter 4 . 4/2 Thank you for your story! It was sooo cute! I really liked it :3 |
PPKLS chapter 4 . 3/30 This go definitely into my favs! Great work, loved it. Plagg is hilarious. It is a very original set-up of the story and really well done characters. Thanks! |
SunshineMLB chapter 4 . 3/29 Thank you for a sweet and fantastic end to this story! |
Neeko96 chapter 4 . 3/29 So loved it! I had to binge read this! So super cute, and you captured them beautifully! I can see this being a thing in canon! (Even though we know it's not especially since Fu and stuff I won't spoil in case crazy people haven't kept up with the show.)- |
calerose chapter 4 . 3/29 This is a favorite for sure! I have never read a fanfic where they knew and had to deal with the consequences of that knowing in such a way and it was perfect. And look at Tikki the rule bender here! Perfect. |
Pipinoir chapter 4 . 3/29 An amazing story, wish it was longer tho cause it was a really cool concept them finding out and saying nothing! |
FloraOne chapter 4 . 3/29 love, this was so absolutely, amazingly,. friggin adorable. all of it! sugarcube and stinky sock in a tree, THE RAIN AND HER CONFESSION, and I lost it when he lost it and cried in happiness and she calmly wiped it away! this chapter had such a depth to it and was so very round and soft and HAPPY and I loved every second! And then how she wilted when he assumed he'd meant all of them anyway? And they went to get andré's! ! ! THIS IS SO CUTE. SO SO SO CUTE LOVE! AHHHHHH! A treasure. A TREASURE! ! ! |