This is excellent! I really hope you continue; I'm interested in seeing where the plot will go from here. Your OCs are so realistic and dynamic and I completely understand and sympathize with their motivations and reactions. You're really great at characterization and I love that so far, you've focused on offscreen characters with a basic knowledge of the show's plot who can criticize and judge as normal people.

I love this! The different story line you take is amazing. I can’t wait for more!

This is such a lovely little plot line! Lila's disabilities have bothered me for a very long time, especially with how strongly I see my sister in Marinette. (My little sister has anxiety and whilst it's not a disability so to speak it is something that needs to be accommodated) So it's really bothered me that no ones gone along that path of taking Lila out via people with actual conditions. I'm so looking forward to more! :)

Fun fact: As I am writing this, there is an ad for hearing aids (for $99) on my screen. I am not sure whether to be amused by the irony or disturbed by the fact that the ad agencies can somehow read the same story as I am.

I cannot believe Lila. I cannot believe literally no one in this universe knows how to use Google (unless it doesn't exist?). I can so believe Farra's reaction. Heck, I only wear glasses, and if I met someone who was wearing glasses without a prescription, just plain glass and frames, and claiming they were legally blind (my grandfather is without his contacts, and the optometrist said I could be in a few years if I'm not careful), I'd be so mad! And I'm only nearsighted! Farra is legally deaf...oh gods, if I were her...

she, ellody, and wayne; I got a feeling Marinette will give them a miraculous, and all 3 of them are gonna help her bring Lila to justice

Oh, awesome! I love the potato power line. Wayne feels very real, more so than many OCs in this fandom. Love it.

Don't underestimate the power of the disabled!

This is great! Please continue!

I did wonder what would happen if people in the show actually had real disabilities. Lila better learn how to use Google, and fast.

I like that your standing up for people who are as I like to call, handicapable. They are disabled, just need a little help from time to time. I can't wait to meet the third person and then see what they do as revenge against Lila.

strike 2 lila...strike 2

These are greatly done! I enjoyed these and I agree Lila needs to get caught in her lies! I look to seeing the next chapters.

This is great so far. I can't wait to meet the other disabled kids and see how they take Lila down.

Thank you sooooo much for writing this. It's one of the things that most pisses me off about Lila, that she fakes disability. There's already a lot of people who think that disabled people are part-time or full-time frauds (especially in the countries where politicians have said stuff like that to get elected) and her actually being a fraud is both heartbreaking and enraging.

Nice work! Hope update soon