| Reviews for His Smile Showed The Sky |
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   CEFox7 chapter 16 . 5/6 Enjoying this story very much. Noticed this hasn’t been updated since January. Hope you are doing well and will continue on till the story is finished. |
| The5thOfNovember chapter 16 . 4/17 Ok this story is so good! I really really like what you’ve done with the ending of the movie. I’ve read a lot of fix it fics and this is by far one of the most believable that I’ve come across. I also really like the way you write Ben here, I like that he is willing to face the consequences of his actions and try to repent of them but still maintains his personality. Do you have any plans to continue with the story? I would love to read more! |
| leofata chapter 16 . 4/12 Would you please update this fic, it's amazing.. Keep me on my toes. |
| EvieArendelle chapter 16 . 4/1 I am LOVING this story so far. I feel that you write each character extremely well. There is a lot of complexity in the situation, and I think you used Jannah well to capture that: Finn (and many others in the Resistance) have every right to be wary of Ben and shouldn’t be expected to drop years of trauma inflicted by him; but, all the same, Ben deserves a chance to prove himself, right? Please, please continue this fic. It is evident that you’ve put plenty of hard work into it so far, and I’d love to see more from you. |
| Pidgey104 chapter 1 . 3/7 How the movie should have ended... |
| catstop chapter 16 . 2/6 This is great! |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/29 Love it! Can't wait for the next update! |
| dferveiro chapter 16 . 1/24 Love this story! So eager to see what they'll do to defend themselves, rescue the pilots, and how Ben will fare through it all. |
| brainy-brownie123 chapter 16 . 1/21 Love love love it! The plot is great, I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/19 please do another! |
| violinpunk chapter 16 . 1/14 Amazing! So looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/11 please please please another chpater! |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/11 Please continue. Amazing story! |
| marteeey chapter 16 . 1/11 FIRST OF ALL I LOVE THIS STORY! Thank you for sitting what so many of us wanted/needed after TROS. Thank you. I really like to it writing style and the way the story unfolds! Also I think the length of the chapters is great for this story. :) easy to read. And I really really hope that you’ll update soon enough although I know how stressful it can be with school etc! |
| FluffyFox chapter 16 . 1/7 This is great! Loving how you're writing this so far. Can't wait to read what's coming next. |
