Please update your fanfic! It's really very nice. I really wanna read the next chapter and know what happened later in the story. PLEASE UPDATE!

Just read the whole story. One word: Awesome! I do hope you continue this some day.

By: Animefan1900

I just read this entire story in one day and it is incredible! I don't know if you're still writing but if you are please please update! I can't wait to find out what happens to poor Kai and Tala. I love the relationship you've built between them and even the way you portray the character of Boris. It's all so heart-wrenching yet addictive at the same time! Thanks for an amazing story and I really hope you finish it!

-FlamingIce94

I dont know if your re still around lol but I will keep waiting for an update o-o

I just re-read the whole thing and now Im hoocked again lol I hope some day you come back

I know its been a while but I just wanted to let you know that I keep loving this story and I really hope you come back soon! take care!

Hi! :]

PLEASE oh PLEASE update soon! I've been dying to find out if tala and kai will get out of the abbey. And what will happen to dear tala! boris needs to die.

By the way, this story is one of my favorites tala/kai stories. There are others, but not as nearly as descriptive and deep as yours.

Thank you for writing this story, very much appreciated!

:]

HEYYY

:D it's been five years love! D: where are your wednesday updatesssss LOL omg. so interesting D: i can't stop reading - if by any chance or miracle, you decide to pick this up again in the future - please finish! o its SO good. i love the style and the balance between psychological and physical pain as well as happiness... now if only i can get more chapters! i absolutely love it. And even if you don't continue - i'll still love it just as much, for what it is (:

Take care!

S2

And? And? Was really enjoying this fic, you have a way with words and a captivating writtibg style ~ I just hope this fic hasn't been abandoned for good

hey are you ever going to update and finish this story? its almost 2010 soo, and you're already 54 chapters in. if not could you put a note in or put in hiatus or just take it off so people dont read it, get interested then wait for an update that never comes. Thanks.

Hello :)

I have to say, that I really love your story! It's amazing.

I love your style of writing, because it makes you believe, that you are a piece of the story, like a quiet spectator.

TalaxKai is my favoriting pairing and I'm interested in the past of the two boys, so your story in the abbey fits perfectly. :D

I spend so much time in the internet, looking for Beyblade-Fanfitcions with Tala and Kai, but I don't like those happy and everything is always fine stories, because, sometimes, they're boring and predictable.

But your fanfic is always so exciting :)

I hope, that you will finish your story, because I've read it for, I think, 6 times, but you haven't uploaded a new chapter yet.

Why did you stop writing?

Perhaps you cann email me the reason? Or, better, email me, that you will go on with your story?

Because the cliffhanger is so mean and I'm waiting for you to continue, since, I think, 2 years. :D

(And sorry for my english, because I'm from Germany. ;))

Here's my email:

Thank you :)

Ever since I began reading this story, it has been hard for me to put it away.

I love it, I really, really do. Your writing style is brilliant. I like the way you didn't make the romantic moments between Tala and Kai too mushy, for it would probably be a little out of character for them.

Their thoughts and feelings also remain in character, which is another bonus.

Many moments in the story have managed to make me smile, laugh, and have also made my heart stop. And the cliff hanger in part 54 had me sitting on the edge of my seat, yelling at the computer screen to get me to the next chapter.

In short, this story is really good so far. I can't wait until the next chapter is up, and I will most definitely be reading this story until the very end, and probably read it over again.

Keep up the good work!

What? i reed all 54 chapters and you stop it there! ah! lol wow that story is reallt good! i have never read one that long that kept getting better and better! keep it up!

What's this? The last update was...almost three years ago? NO

Come on, you've come this far, don't quit now!

Please update?

please

i beg of you

write more!