Reviews for Lost at Sea
Guest chapter 4 . 7/28
Grenat! They landed! That was reckless of Hikaru, he could have been too tired to swim.
lilly-flower15 chapter 4 . 7/25
great chapter update soon
SavannahWeaver0 chapter 4 . 7/19
I love this story! I cannot wait for you to update more and to see what happens.
Ninja Star Light chapter 4 . 7/17
Well I am glad that they were able to get off the boat and get some water. Since honey and Mori have taught sessions in the us military (at least that was referenced in the anime) would that mean they know at least basic survival skills like making a fire from dry sticks and making the small bark chips? Or at least using a rock to sharpen a stick to fish? They just seem more probably then the others knowing it. Anyways I like how this story is going and I hope you update soon.
Thank you
beancounter22765 chapter 4 . 7/10
Hooray! They made it to shore. After water, food, and rest they be more able to start surviving. May have been a long time in coming, but worth the wait.

May your plot bunnies continue to be active and prolific.
WysteriaHysteria chapter 3 . 2/16
I really like this, so much happened in just three chapters! I was hooked on the part where the ship started to go under, the chaos, the confusion, the frustration afterwards! I just !
MollyMuffinHead chapter 3 . 2/13
Yea! The beach. Another day and they probably would have died from dehydration. The conversation between Mori and Kyoya was done well. Can definitely tell they've matured since Ouran. I wish he wasn't, but Kyoya is probably right about his brothers. Hope the island has what they need.
MollyMuffinHead chapter 2 . 2/13
That was tense. You held the tension well throughout, slowing down and speeding up with good pacing. Excitedly heading for the next chapter.
MollyMuffinHead chapter 1 . 2/13
Great start. So, two already in love. Interesting premise.
Kristy LeeKl chapter 3 . 1/31
They were all in the same boat, quite literally. There were no aristocrats or commoners: just survivors.
I've quite enjoyed reading this story. I've played several island survival games, and I would love to see how this will play out.
Aoile chapter 3 . 1/27
Thank you very much for the new chapter! Ah. So there was no food/water nor medicine in the little boat, just what Kyoya grabbed. Hikaru's way of handling the situation was not surprising, but Hunny... I was a bit surprised by that sulking attitude, like a spoild kid, because he's a martial artist, I thought he would have more control than that (and in the manga it's showed how mature, intuitive he is), on the other hand your version is receveible: in the club he's used to have all the cakes he wants, Mori always preventing his needs...
The more mature are Mori, Kyouya and Kaoru. Mori seems very aware of what could happen to Haruhi in these extreme conditions, aware the civil vernis of the male hosts could/may crack. Kyoya too is lucid about the fragile state of his sanety... do you think it could be an elaborate plot of his brothers?
Ninja Star Light chapter 3 . 1/28
This has been a very interesting read! I like that you made the hosts real by having them irritated and seeming human with their fear. Great job and I look forward to the next chapter. :)
beancounter22765 chapter 3 . 1/26
Thank you for the new chapter. I can see why it was so hard to write.

So it was Kyoya that said "I love you" at the end of chapter 2. I can see the tension building as all of the boys' feelings start manifesting.

It will be interesting to see how the pampered boys adjust to roughing it.
Aoile chapter 2 . 1/23
Hi! Reading again the chapter.
Hikaru's failed attempt cooking curry with chicken that they throw away despite it remained edible, is kinda lugubre, sinister.

I mean it shows how much all of them (even Haruhi) never had not go hungry to the point of starvation, it was never a true matter of survival. Soon they will not have the luxury to reject food because of taste, the only option to throw out food is when it's to avoid poisoning food.
Aside food, the hosts also are going to regret the clothes, the shoes : for warmth, to change in clean clothes, to walk or climb ; also medecines, hmm..the lifeboat must have a few.
I hope your next chapter is not too difficult to write.
lilly-flower15 chapter 2 . 1/4
great chapter update soon
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