Very interesting job so far, I hope to read more when possible.

What about bringing in Silk to the harem?

Really should switch Kyle to Peter. Getting a bit annoying and sometimes confusing because everyone knows him as Peter.

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

I don’t know how I feel about having Peter’s conscience still occupying the dude’s mind

Give him anna may parker's powers with his clone ghost spiders teleportation intangiblty cameofloge and mayday Parker look them up on the wike

Thx for the update good one! Liked the way he handled carlie

too long since your last update hope for another soon

What about silk

sweeeet cant wait foe more keep them coming dude. one more for the harem x23 laura an oc character a skrull girl or mustique

I loved your story I'm looking forward to the next chapter I'm Brazilian and I'm loving it..

I loved your story I'm looking forward to the next chapter I'm Brazilian and I'm loving it .

I loved your story I'm looking forward to the next chapter I'm Brazilian and I'm loving it

Please add Jean Grey, Scarlet Witch, and possibly other female mutants like Storm, Emma Frost, and Psylocke.

Awesome job bro.

Awesome~ Certainly doing things better than Otto or Peter, though I'm glad Peter is able to be Kyle's Jiminy Cricket in this.
Doesn't hurt to have someone to give advice.