Pls update

So I'm about halfway through catching up with where the story currently is. I like the story so far and think a competent Naruto that's a little older and grows up alongside the uchiha clan is interesting and isn't something I've seen before at least not in a similar way. I felt like Gamakichi's short jokes and demand for snacks the next time felt strange considering Naruto just told him there was a life on the line and he needed his help, but I also don't know their dynamic so maybe that is a serious Gamakichi, I just think without a longer scene between him and the toad or any previous conversations it felt weird to have Naruto scared his probable cousin is going to die while the toad was joking, though a longer discussion wouldn't have made sense in that situation. I have five chapters left to go, but I hope the Uchiha troubles are handled well. Naruto being on the same level as Itatchi could add something to how the coup is handled, but I don't see him going along with killing them off even if he's told they had a hand in the Kyuubi attack, as that would only be the fault of one Uchiha and not the whole clan. I'm also looking forward to how the Mikoto/Naruto romance develops, but where I currently am I don't see any signs of that coming other than Naruto being curious about her marriage. I kind of hope they don't get together upon all the other Uchiha dieing and there's a different resolution to the conflict that also ends up with Mikoto and Naruto developing a relationship, but there hasn't been enough interaction with them or around what's happening with the coup for me to have a good idea of where things are going. Something else I'm curious about is Danzo. I feel like he might have pushed for Naruto to go on this mission now to get him out of the way during the Uchiha coup drama, but with Naruto in play and maybe working together with Itatchi I imagine Danzo trying to get rid of the Uchiha and pushing their clan into a corner could get turned around on Danzo and with Danzo dead, declared a traitor, or out of the picture in some other way there could actually be a peaceful resolution with the Uchiha clan. I'm not sure what would end up happening to Fugaku though.

When will you send the 11 chapter

I am questioning Naruto’s competence. He’s a horrible shinobi. Is he powerful? Yes, he is relatively powerful, not S ranked but around mid A rank which is still somewhat powerful. I am not talking about power. Naruto is an ANBU, ANBU are the pinnacle of shinobi and yet Naruto is a horrible shinobi. He underestimates his opponents, which eventually leads to him almost losing his life, he also has a horrible grip on his emotions. Naruto just got out of hospital, his left arm practically useless and he shouldn’t be using chakra and yet he fell prey to Tobi’s provocations and attacked him, virtually undoing his recovery process. After he attacked Tobi once, he attacked Tobi again and again, which highlights Naruto’s stupidity. Surely he would’ve realised after his first attack that he wouldn’t be able to actually inflict damage on Tobi? If not his first attack then at the very most the second? But he didn’t. He knew exactly what Tobi was trying to do and still let his emotions get the better of him, not to mention he got destroyed by Itachi minutes after. Naruto should really pick his fights. Both Tobi and Itachi are much stronger than he is, and both are more intelligent and can actually control their emotions. Naruto is very incompetent.

Looking forward to Naruto X mikoto

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Like I sad on twitter don't get discouraged with bad reviews. Just do your best, and surely this story will be appreciated.

Many times I couldn't understand the logic in for example chapter 3 of a random story, but then all sort of clicked in the 9th.

When I try reading a story, I fully trust the author to make it interesting and engaging. I don't agree with Naruto becoming all powerful in the first chapter. Let him grow up, sort out his own feelings, and overcome each weakness step-by-step.

Loving this story and I simply adore Mikoto x Naruto pairing.

great chapter keep it up

THIS! THIS is IT!

the chapter is good, don't worry. looking forward to how mindset and character of naruto will change with all things happening to him recently

Obito seemed kind of OOC not gonna lie. I don’t think he would have the same amount of animosity towards Naruto to do a whole speech like that like he did towards Kakashi in the Fourth World War

Mine would be Konan personally.

I did enjoy the fight, and I’m very curious on what the black lightning could be, as it kind of came out of nowhere. I doubt it’s just regular black lightning like Darui and the Sandaime Raikage has, as it made him lose control. Though there was also red in his eyes, and his pupil was a slit. Hiruzen said he didn’t sense much Kyuubi chakra though, so I can’t imagine there was enough to make him go four tails berserk like that.

Another great chapter like always really enjoyed this I don't think he tortured him but instead September some sort of message but the only way to truly find out is possibly later on down the line. or maybe you can in the next chapter I look forward to finding out.

Torture? It would have made more sense for him to show him what is actually going on so he does not turn to Danzo. If he actually tortured him when he is still in this broken state then he is no longer a caring individual and just deserves to die. He was not like that in canon. Not to mention if Naruto was pushed any further he would give in and there would be no point. There is only so much one person can take before they just give up and Naruto has already reached that point.

My friend, I only hope that in genjutsu he gives him the keys or the true reasons for his actions based on the betrayal of the uchiha clan, the act of danzo, tobi, the little force of command towards danzo knowing that he sabotaged his negotiations with the clan and Naruto loses love, especially trust and faith towards Hiruzen and the elders for his actions and that he alone or remains in Konoha for his loved ones, for the sacrifice of his parents that they made towards the village and give up future as a hokage as long as he does not eliminate enemies like Tobi and focus more on his family. I look forward to the next chapter just to see only Naruto's reaction to Hiruzen and the elders for their poor handling.