Reviews for Vermin Tide Quest
ManwithaPlan113 chapter 32 . 10/20
When extinction or annihilation is at hand, no alternative is too far.

Stand amongst the ashes of a trillion dead souls and ask the ghosts of honor matters.

An excellent chapter as per usual Xerzes. I will eagerly await the next one
DaneNagai chapter 32 . 10/19
Alright, I have finally read this entire story up to its current chapter, and this had me grinning from ear-to-ear through it all. Man, has it ever been a blast reading about degenerate monster girls finally getting their commepeunces when faced with another realm that has endured more hardships and are definitely more powerful by a landslide. And that's without Chaos being the main threat here. You did a real great job at bringing Hell that is Warhammer Fantasy to MGQ like a freight train, and its damn. The Ubersreik Five are just as bombastic as always with their fight against Skaven and Monster Girls-alike (Witch Hunt Village to name), and with the introduction of other WH characters like Balthasar and Teclis are really entertaining as all hell (especially Golden Boy Gelt (guy never changes!)). That and I absolutely love the Tomb Kings segments as the MGs try to invade the Old World only to end up getting their asses handed to them by both the Tomb Kings and Greenskins.

Moving on, I'm rather surprised you've given Illias with actual developement. I mean she's still the same bitch goddess as the original, but you've given her enough ambiguity and some humility (I guess?) as she works alongside Sigmar, Morr, and Morai Heg on bringing some semblence of sanity in this depraved little world.

However, for all my praises, I have some criticisms. Namely that little sh*t named Luka. By Sigmar's Hammer, his arc is SOOOO BORING. At best, he is an irrelevant character with such a tedious character arc (or in the words Kerillian; a mayfly). At worst, he is such an annoying inconvenience that I really just want to see him blown to pieces either by the Ubersreik Five, the Skaven, Gelt, or Chaos itself. How is it that this kid doesn't understand the necessarity of killing monsters. Granted, no one likes killing but its either you or them making a sex toy and then eating you!

I could say the same for Alice, however, she does have a more interesting character developement than the brat. But still, their segments leave much to be desired.

And the Ubersreik Five feel kinda left out as the chapters go on because of that. Gelt and Teclis are great substitutes for the WH side but I'm really more invested in the Five as they go around leaving behind a trail of bodies behind them. I mean, I read this story for the description alone.

Anyways, the story is really good. Despite my grievances with some parts of it, I advise that keep on writing what you think works well and stick with it. I enjoy what I'm seeing and I'm heavily invested on how the plot unravels.

Hope all is well and that you're safe during the End Times!
GrumpyGrue chapter 32 . 10/17
Luka still had hangups over killing, mental horizons still short like his stature. Then again, he might just be slow to process Skaven. Cute Alice. Does basked snake skin burn like leather car seats under sunlight? More appreciation for human customs thanks to Luka? Yessssss Alice, sssssee how much monster sssspecies sssssuck! Not literally like monsters tend to do.

The fan lore is deliciously corpulent like a lorry, patches holes from canon story. More big than Kejourou's wig. Balthazar and Promestein sounds like potential ship. Had monsters ruined BDSM for Promestein? Most angely angel being hurt, word never got out. But if it did, there might've been much collective REEEE. Not just monsters from knowing they were on the verge of being served comeuppance, but humans and angels who could have revered Promestein as a saintess. Maybe even trees since they were allied with humans, with some help from Ilias.

The skaven steal the show once again. Hilarious rats. Gnome stacks bodies to the...not ceiling, sky, and rides on 24-inch Chrome. Chrome is a loli, but 24 inches is too short for her latest height. Or maybe not because Promestein made her shorter. Maybe when Chrome was a toddler.
GrumpyGrue chapter 11 . 10/7
2nd to last paragraph of chapter 31. Thought "an idiot sandwich"
GrumpyGrue chapter 12 . 10/2
This damn site even prevents me from saving changes to my profile. There's stuff on there I'd change, but can't, unlike the times before when I could. Really sucks. Might as well attempt an alt account to see if functionality returns.

Nanabi would be bedridden from injury. Bedridden sounds sexual if you look at it from another angle.
GrumpyGrue chapter 13 . 10/2
Chapter 13 is redolent of delicious spleen. Those three are playing 21, a classic.

I imagined a game that might pique interest of monsters: Cards Against Humanity. Get it? Joke.

Speaking of that second card game, I would never support that company as a consumer. Looking through the assorted political dealings of that game company sickens me. All mainstream politics sickens me, because it's shared falsehood coming from people pretending to work against each other, so that they mutually profit at the expense of the masses. There's little to gain but lies and being manipulated in observing commonly aired politics as a regular citizen.

It's really bad how much websites are kowtowing to propaganda that pushes corona virus, or BLM and other garbage. I've seen blatant censorship and IP bans across multiple sites on threads that discuss it as the very topic, with site admins lying and denying censoring info that go against the mainstream sentiment and what government wants us to know on it. Even my account on FF is losing some functionality, including sending private messages. Though I can read the inbox, oddly enough.
GrumpyGrue chapter 14 . 10/2
Speaking of later chapters. That is how you do a vampire story. So many people lost faith when the sparkly vampire abomination came out. But this is good, like the classics where people shank vamps with wood. Alice the vampire slayer. Her human name has the same amount of letters as Buffy.

I want to put a reindeer nose and antlers on Alice. She can do mandatory community service as a Sleigh-er. Angels in the sleigh with a whip.

"Ho ho ho there, orphans of monster cruelty! I bring you gifts to kill mamano ho ho hos! Sharp crosses, good for stabbing monsters, doubles as shurikens for self defense. Kunoichi elves, get back in the dojo, stop stealing Ilias's mojo. Merry Iliasmas, and leave your cookies and milk at the church or be smited!"
GrumpyGrue chapter 31 . 10/2
Best fic in the MGQ crossover category. Kicks monster arse, makes them sparse. Karma in the dharma. Fateburn got nowhere failing at Ghandicus, and the rest of the mamano failed at CONQUERING THE GALAXY.

I r8 this 8/8. Not joking like some of the other fics I r8 8/8. Two thumbs up monster bums. Covered in capsaicin crystals. This fic is hot, it slays the THOT. Must read.
GrumpyGrue chapter 30 . 10/2
I think outspoken druid is a pretty cool guy. eh has more justice in one butt hair than Granberia has in her whole body and doesn't afraid of anything.
GrumpyGrue chapter 29 . 10/2
Mash the traitor like a tater
GrumpyGrue chapter 28 . 10/2
Necrodermis on the wenis is stronger than monsters obsessed with p-
GrumpyGrue chapter 27 . 10/2
Krump monsters that turned tree civ into a stump. They are a roadbump that rape when they hump. Run them off the world fast, like Forrest Gump.

Luka telling off a THOT for her NTR attempt last chapter is great. Respect.

Turn Minagi into aburaage. Soy has xenoestrogens, and Minagi is a xeno that has too much estrogen and needs to be fried.
GrumpyGrue chapter 26 . 10/2
How's it feel Seath?
Granberia tried to put the tit in credens justitiam, but didn't have credens and jus iam.
GrumpyGrue chapter 25 . 10/2
Monmusu swerve. Settra does not serve.
GrumpyGrue chapter 24 . 10/2
The painting began to shite, lol. Funny typo. Succubi must die, don't sample their pie.
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