This is fantastic. I’ve only been introduced to TDP recently, so I’m very glad to see that their are some awesome content creators that can do this amazing world and it’s fantastic characters justice! Having also read your one-shots about cuddles and Soren and Zym’s workout, your love for these characters and ability to connect with them on an emotional roller level is impressive. I’m also glad that I’m not the only one who found myself angry at the way Moonshadow culture treated Rayla for pretty much her entire life, and it makes your portrayal of her and Callum’s relationship both sad and fantastic; her culture considers showing emotion and fear a shameful weakness; her community shoved the perceived failings of her parents onto a fifteen year old; her own guardian figure shames her and is fully prepared to kill her for doing the right thing (Runaan’s even more of a jackass in the novelization of Book 1, if you’ve read itand when she finally returns, she’s been made a pariah and, although he somewhat redeems himself, is also blamed by the only other person from her childhood for acts completely out of her control. Then she has Callum, who not only sees the good in her but refuses to let her deny it like everyone else from her home, and is willing to jump off of a cliff for her. You portrayed that perfectly both through their actions and Ethari’s musings. On top of all that, it was really freaking cute. Anyways, thanks again for writing this, and I hope life starts treating you better!

"Remember," he said casually as he walked by "You're still kids, so no funny business under my roof"

lol I laughed so hard that my sides hurt.

My gosh, I just realized what I didn't leave a review first time I readed this...
This fic is beautiful and I enjoyed all the chapters uwu.
I was reading a lot of fanfics in english and now I have understood and enjoyed more than the first time xd (my first language is Spanish lol)
And welp, I'll be here, waiting for the next chapter!
Seguí así!

This is SO good. The characterization is spot-on, the dynamics are on point, and every part of this feels like it might as well have come from the writers themselves. The world-building of Silvergrove is really neat as well, and I'm sure I'll only feel that way even more strongly when the final chapter comes out!

I love the couch scence, it's too lovely. This story just gets better every chapter. Ethari is the best, and i was dying with the headbutting phase story!
Good luck next chapter! :D

The chapter was very nice and emotional, i really love this story, keep it up the high spirit.
Good luck next chapter!

Oh boy. Makes me wonder if the next chapter will cause to bump up the rating to M. . .

I just love how your embarrassing Rayla through this. I was half expecting Ethari to say something along the lines of "you'll need to know this when you have kids".

Love all 3 chapters, felt like watching extra episodes. Themes are both fluffy and deep at the same time, this is beautiful. I'd actually suggest trying to get a Wonderstorm career... Stay safe!

Can this be made canon? Just saying, it's awesome!

You've really captured the feeling of the characters, the zest of young love, the return of a mistreated hero, and the difficulties of bringing two disparate cultures (and races) together! And just enough angst to make it not saccharine sweet. Well done you!

Can't wait for the next update!

WoW! I’ve followed this story since you posted chapter one and I’ve waited for updates (it’s ok haha I understand! You’re blessing me with WORDS! It’s ok if it’s not very frequent!) since you first posted this story. But I’ve got to say that this chapter really was something else! The angst, the feels, the fluff! All so wonderfully mixed together and to be honest, I cried there like a child with feels flooding me and oof! Thank you for that! Keep up the good work and know that I’ll always be there to read the next update, whenever it comes out! Thank you for this story!

- .wizard

I think you made the right choice. The scene with Callum and Athari was really moving and Athari and Rayla's talk was heart warming. I'm only sorry we just have one more chapter to look forward to.

So glad you decided to pick this up again! Your writing is a cut above most others in how natural, adorable and heartfelt the moments between Callum, Rayla and Ethari come across. The new direction you're taking this sounds great. Keep it up!

4-part minseries. Sounds good.

I love how it's going so far! Can't wait to find out the ending