This is adorable. And the thoughts of Hornet feel in character.

Also, you have some great turns of phrase here and there.

Wish I could think of more specifics to mention, but I can't. So I'll just say I was smiling and almost cooing from the adorableness of all these chapters.

I need to find as many pictures of Ghost being cuddly with Hornet as I can, because that is amazing.

Well done, I want more, hope you get ideas.

Happy writing.

Man, this has been quite an adventure! You did such a good job at showing the character's inner the family bond between the Knight and Hornet warms my heart everytime. I never got bored reading this for the fourth time, although you used the original Hollow Knight story, you added your own twist and it is so nice to see an author this dedicated. I think this fanfiction is the best in the entire Hollow Knight genre, it may not have as much characters and words as From Eternal Slumber, but the content is compact and solid. I would like you to make a few chapters relating to the Godseekers, or you could do some chapters about Silksong, I don't think I have ever seen anyone write about that. All in all, amazing job mate:! P.S there is no grammatic errors!

This is the cutest shit ever

I love this, keep up with the amazing work.

just adorable

How about Hornet making Millibelle regret stealing from her sibling.
Eternal laughing lady in the city of tears
Dung Defender
Godseeker
Unn
Leg Eater
The Hunter bush dude.
The gigantic Lifeblood creature you can see in the back of the lifeblood room in the abyss.
White Palace
Path of Pain
The Pale Lurker
At the very end, Ghost beats the Pantheon of Hollownest and becomes part of the void god, but they become the heart/focus/main mind/whichever, and is, despite being horrifyingly and immense, is still the lovable goof that they are. Oh god, imagine them trying to hug their sister in that form!?
Sorry if you already did some. I've read an uncountable amount of fanfics and everything is scrambled up in my head.

Good story. I really liked reading it, but having 31k words can be intimidating. I’d suggest making another story for the suggestions.

But, I think my favourite part of the entire story is when Hornet gives the Knight the string. I can just imagine Ghost floating away like Marry Poppins, while Hornet’s just there going WTF. Can someone make that into a fig?

BAPY

This is bringing all sorts of happiness to me. Please keep going if you still believe that you can continue it.

Cute

Ch8 is a bloody hot. I howled with laughter reading it

Every time I reach a chapter I’m just blown away by how wholesome it is! It’s great, I love it!

Now all we need is Quirrel, dung defender, maybe Lemm, and Myla!

Definitely enjoying this, and I hope that Hornet meets Millibelle and shows her how she feels about her stealing from her little sibling. I still smack her when I pass her. Oh, and that guy passing out his babies to random people would be fun too. I'm glad I looked around FFN again.

I gotta admit, I was super worried when the title was "Blue Lake" and Quirrel showed up.