| Reviews for When things go wrong |
|---|
  Guest chapter 14 . 7/14 Please update I really hope they find jay and the storage unit that Hailey is going to look at should give them a lead to jay if not an address to his location. |
 Gabi Amato chapter 14 . 6/3 OMG! I’m looking forward for your update to see what will happen |
| YuukiAsuna41 chapter 13 . 3/19 Okay, this is too cruel and I'll be waiting for your next. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/14 Story is all over the place. Forget about reading it |
| Margie chapter 12 . 3/14 Great chapter. Very harsh to replace Jay already. Poor Hailey. Can't wait to see what's next. |
| TARA chapter 12 . 3/13 Really enjoying this story. Loved it. So looking forward to see where you're going with this story. |
| lanteaddicted1 chapter 13 . 3/14 Will they find Jay soon? Or will there be more chapters before they find him? |
| RCMCWolf chapter 13 . 3/14 great! please give us more! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/12 Nice job with this one! |
| floopdeedoopdee chapter 11 . 3/11 UGhhhhhhhhhhhh! Great chapter! Ugggggghhhhhhhh! :) |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/6 Still slightly difficult to read, but noticing some improvements in your grammar. The storyline itself is very good. I plan to continue reading. Maybe Adam and Hailey can go in undercover as a beautiful ‘couple’ to get taken by the traffickers so that they can locate and rescue Jay and all the others. I’m a Burzek shipper all the way, but do think Adam and Haley look stunning together. Just something to think about, but will read no matter where you go with this story. |
| ling er chapter 8 . 3/5 Thank you for the update Please continue..what happen next...i do hope when Jay is found. Will has been contacted...and standby in the ED with dr. Marcel |
| Elvira25 chapter 8 . 3/7 Wow. Great story. Quite intense. Lots happening. Lots going on. Love it all. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/1 Again, storyline is very good, but difficult to read due to grammar, spelling, and sentence structure. I’m wondering if English is not your primary nor even secondary language? I’d really like to continue reading your stories, but you need to get a Beta writer to help you formulate the story. I’ll check back with your next chapter to see how it goes. |
| Ling er chapter 6 . 3/1 Or course i love it Yay chapter 6.. Would you include as well Marcel when Jay is being brought to Med ED..perhaps bleeding in Jay's stomach beside GSW on his leg..Marcel needa to operate with will watch from OR glass Thank you for making awesome story Keep writing and update pl3ase |
