Fudge! Kaoru almost got killed! Damn it Kenshin! XD

It was hilarious when they were duking it out inside the car, but I felt a little bad because Kaoru was seriously terrified for her life and it was a misunderstanding that could have gone really bad if the wrong people had been involved.

I'd blame Sano for all of it, but I suppose it would be a great best man story on the wedding. XD

Clever and SO fun, this would deserve more chapters! I was laughing all along. Having Kenshin fearing his own paranoia (he just nearly killed a civilian) and distancing himself in consequence is a very interesting development too! At least he’s understood he’ll have to take some vacations and asked for a break, good boy XD

Man, I laughed so hard while I was reading this. I'm also going to go check out the story you said it was based off of, so thanks for the recommendation!

Wow Kenshin flew off the deep end fast, hahaa. Poor guy, thinking everyone's out to get him. And Kaoru had a valid point about driving a stranger late at night that's recommended as a "good guy" means nothing. You still have to carry something to protect you. Love this story, wish it were a little longer though.

this is really great! the whole situation, amusing. poor girl was just doing a friend a favor for their friend and sleepy kenshin getting all paranoid... all considered, it turned out better than expected for all concerned. loved this too! at least in this one, they get to see each other again, be friends and possibly let it grow.
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I loved the story that you were inspired by and I also greatly enjoyed reading this. Great Job!

This was such a great combination of thriller and comedy! It's so funny reading how paranoid Kenshin is and how well the misunderstanding worked on both sides in the sense Kaoru thought he was a suspicious character too. Trust Sano to be the cause of the whole issue lol. Thoroughly enjoyed the read!

I like a lot this history! Kenshin like assasin and the confusion in the car make me laught a lot w !
Keep going with the fic! I’ll learn you and follow you .

Excellent work and writing, as usual! This story was very funny; don't worry about updating Defender, just take your time with ease :). Thank you for this!

Great story! Really enjoyed reading it :)