This was awesome! I loved seeing the episode through your eyes. Great writing!

Good one. Of co0urse Jack would joke around with making the name.

I was so hyped when I received the notification in my mail! I read it all again, love how you write!

YAY! Glad to see an update! Congrats on finishing your novel! Looking forward to more!

Good job boys. Love stories when Jack show he ability to fly. Jack better taslk up Riley good so she can get this job. And Ri better be honest and no illegal hacking.

Love this

Thanks for the update ! Poor poor Mac, it's so hard not knowing what is true anymore...

Good they got Nikki to tell them where the virus will be unleashed. Hopefully they get there in time.

Hi ! Love that we see a part of it through Riley's eyes, how she observes Mac. Thanks for your work !

Hm. Will she or wont she. Does she still have any real feelings left for Mac to not shot him. This time its Mac being the protector. He wont let anything happen to Jack.

Nice reliving if this!

Love this

Ah Mac. hopefully Jack will get some answers out of Kendrick. And they will be about Nikki. At least no one got hurt for now.

Very intense! Love it!

Love this further look into the premier episode.