Very descriptive, I really felt like I was there. *blush*

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You may want to fix your new chapter, hard to read with the weird "extra" text throughout the whole chapter.

Could you please repost chapter 9 as plain text? It’s got all the formatting code at the moment, so it’s a bit hard to read!

The Chapter text doesn't show right

I love this story! It’s so in-character, funny, and well-written. I can’t wait for the second part!

This is great so far and I'm excited to see where you go with it!