Reviews for An Evening in Atlas
YACOV chapter 1 . 5/12
Nice. I thoroughly enjoyed that.

One note: just after Weiss pointed out how much she and Oscar were beating their competition, the two names you wrote for the people giving her comebacks were 'Ruby' and 'Ron'.

I just wanted to take the opportunity to say that I hope that at some point you consider writing more of the excellent RWBY x Kim Possible crossover works like those you made in the past.
Raj8 chapter 1 . 4/25
Another cute one-shot, although I have to agree with Oscar. The true moral of this story is to never let a friend know about your crushes. :D
MonkD.drgn chapter 1 . 3/25
This is gold. Weiss is so Weiss, even in her mind where she's thinking things she would never say out loud she's Weiss.

Oscar was sort of in the periphery but thats ok for a story like this.

Jaune and Ruby were cute in a very respectable way. I think the thing I like the most about this story how I feel Like I could see this happing canonically, if only off-screen.
Fyr RedNight chapter 1 . 2/17
Great one-shot, it was sweet and entertaining to read.
Good job.
Blizzaga Saga chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
Good stuff. Thanks for giving me something good to read on Christmas! I really like how you portrayed Weiss in this. Another reviewer put it well: she's simultaneously evil and a great friend.
poetrymagic12 chapter 1 . 12/19/2019
You didn't me you put uploaded this story.

I LOVE IT! The Lancaster stuff is so cute! I already want more stories.

Adding this to my favorites list...
Mengsk chapter 1 . 12/18/2019
Plenty of tales exist of friends setting friends up together. But that final, well timed, "Ruby!" was something new and brilliant.
CrowSkull chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
This is a really nice addition to my Lancaster collection. Thank you, and amazing job. ;)
thedock.j2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
I honestly think Oscar stole the show here, especially with that ending quote! I loved it!
Jimmy1201 chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
I really liked this story. It surprised me in that I thought it was going to focus on Wang And Blake. Jaune and Ruby are a much more adorable couple. This evening will certainly be good training for them on paying attention to the terms of negotiation being worked out in front of them.

Thanks for the story, Jimmy

PS this reminds methere is a new season started, I think, I need to go check it out,
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
This is 100% gold right here. Great work.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
Oh I this is too good, I love the dynamic of the four of them. Weiss being a matchmaker and the two leaders her targets, and Oscar’s presence is a nice addition. Great work
Riggy Minus chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
This is super freaking cute!
Review chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
Not agonizingly slow paced and nicely written. Weiss felt a little off, but good. A pleasant read, I hope you won’t be stretching this. Maybe up to 20k?
loganhunter2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
This is fucking cute I love it Weiss is simultaneously evil and a great friend