I can’t wait to see if they’ve actually left Hogwarts or just left that meeting. Great story so far!

This chapter is , i dont know how to say it , full of cliche or something like this . They steamrolled over everthing to easy . Also you didnt show the interaction between snape and harry in DaDa , which is very important plus what malfoy is doing .

I’m glad you skipped a recitation of the memories. You are right, we do know them. This chapter was fabulous! The beating of Ron and the chat with Dumbledore. Thanks for sharing.

I love this

I also resent Dumbledore for taking so long with these memories and leaving blank holes in the useful information.

I'm excited about how this confrontation with the director took place.

and I think the fight with Ron was also credible, he is a jealous idiot, in which anything that runs away from what he believes in, he calls it darkness.
as if teenagers more often than not don't have ataccks of rager
Great job

I like it so much

I like the cover art of the story, especially hermione's hair. it looks incredible.

oh, the lupine reflections are interesting. he is really half absent.

I like Luna and Neville.

and I love that the initials of harry and hermione match, it's sweet, lmao

it was an incredible birthday
and i love harry's parents letters
great chapter

Very interesting
And i love dobby
Thanks for sharing

I don't like dumbledore, so it's fun to read him being put in his place.
I hate how he ruled Harry as his guardian, , when he was not one

Hey, hello. It's an interesting story.
i love hermione's parents.
and I like the conclusions they’re coming to.
I also like the courage of both. it was fun.
and your little confessions are sweet

Not a bad chapter at all and seeing more darkness from Harry showing.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

very good story

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