I'm still keeping my fingers crossed that you'll do a multi-chap Harmony fic - this one is lovely!

This was so good

Ah, this was lovely. It captures exactly what I think ought to have happened directly after the war. (Except for Hermione not being able to recover her parents' memories, which is sad but realistic). The hurt, the PTSD, the almost unhealthy dependence on each other, but also the eventual healing and finding love in the aftermath. Beautifully done.

This was incredible. Thank you for sharing!

I can't wait for you to do a long Harmony fic

wow, that was a fabulous first attempt at harmony !
first, I love the conversations between harry and hermione and what you writed about PTSD

and i also don’t know how harry and hermione could accept ron so easily. it wasn’t something like the triwizard (which was really bad for Ron too), but it was war.

the conversations and looks between hermione and harry are so significant that they fill me with love.

and rons reaction matched his horribly temperament, I also think he should appear over time, but I believe that the escape from his post-war stress was to be more aggressive

hermione crying with the cup broke my heart

and the teddy moment is so sweet, i love it .. just like the kiss in the baby store.

and ginny, i almost felt a little sorry for her, but harmony is my favorite thing.

it was an incredible story, you are a fabulous writer

Beautiful :)

I think this works well as a one-shot as well. If you continue it, maybe snapshots of their family life?
This is a sweet story. I can't believe I hadn't reviewed it before D:

I enjoyed this one shot. It could easily be a fab multi chapter story but equally stands well by itself. Thanks for sharing your first story, hopefully the first of many!

Such a great story

A sweet and beautiful story.

Not sure how I just discovered this but it was lovely. Captured everything I wanted post war that was never discussed, and all in a one shot!

my preference is that Ron is a horrible character, Luna is boss, and Neville is his only true dude friend. Hermione could go either way but you can guess what I truly want. but to each his own I guess.

This gave me such warm, fuzzy feeling. It hit the right spots. When a piece about a pairing makes me think, "Oh, this is how relationships should be: organic, bittersweet, and breathtaking," it usually means a job well done. This was exactly what I wanted to read! So thank you!

I love this story. It’s cute and real. I think you should do a second part to it.. not a second chapter but another one shot... maybe a few years down the road after they have another kid? Even if you don’t it was really well done.