| Reviews for Rising from the ashes |
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   fuze'89 chapter 11 . 4h Definitely interested in this. Keep going (: |
| levi.hall.9279 chapter 11 . 7/31 Love the lovey dovey ending with Tony bringing Harry into his family; eager to see what you have planned next |
| bombbastik chapter 11 . 7/25 I love this, but if I had to change one thing it would be the permanent scaring. Maybe it heals slow, but it bothers me that they were able to permanently hurt him. Other than that I don’t have any real problem. Maybe he can get headshot and go through a burning day. That would be epic. I hope to see more you are a good writer |
| Triforce Dragons chapter 11 . 7/1 I love this. This is great! |
| LGVLO chapter 4 . 6/29 “The cold never bothered me anyway...” |
| anja.quickert.9 chapter 11 . 6/24 :-) |
| Nemhain2009 chapter 11 . 6/23 Loving your story! |
| brownie-123 chapter 11 . 6/21 Just found this and I really like it. Interested to see where this goes |
| mizukikage chapter 11 . 6/20 Kawaii! Definitely looking forward to seeing what's next! |
| Kryn Womble chapter 11 . 6/16 I have to admit, non-magical drugs being able to overpower Basilisk Venom (the most powerfully corrosive poison in the world) and Phoenix Tears (The limitless and most powerful healing substance in the world that could nullify any disease or sickness) that has amalgamated into his very blood is an extremely ridiculous idea, especially if he becomes fire whenever he damn pleases. And then there’s the shrapnel in his tongue...why? What purpose is that supposed to serve in adding to the plot? It just makes things unnecessarily difficult and pointless since the shrapnel can be ripped out and HarryJesus can just heal from it, no problemo. Harry is already timid and antisocial as it, be barely talks unless spoken to, Afghan terrorist torture aside from the Dursley version. If you’re going to suggest that Tony or a doctor would refuse the procedure of out of fear they’d do more damage, Harry would still heal through it regardless. Hell, you even write that the space the shrapnel’s occupying is still healing and pushing the shrapnel out through the tongues at the same time so that you don’t have to write a surgery scene to explain it away. Stark refusing to go to the hospital, I can completely understand. But refusing a doctor to do a medical check on a child? Absolutely not, even Tony isn’t that arrogant, nigh unbeatable healing ability aside. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/16 Beautiful! I'm really enjoying this story. Thank you. |
| Mar91 chapter 11 . 6/16 I like |
| alec-potter chapter 11 . 6/18 Nice chapter. But hope the story picks up the pace now. |
| geekymom chapter 11 . 6/18 Awesome chapter! |
| Adelaide Darkburn chapter 11 . 6/17 please continue |
