Hope y'all get well soon!

OMG! This is so intriguing! Absolutely cannot wait for more! Update soon please!

please update soon please

Please continue this! It's really good so far and I would love to see where you take it from here!

Can't wait to read more

Great chapter. Will Kol and Bella escape from the other side and if so when. What type of supernatural is Bella, maybe what ever Bella is, she can use her abilities to escape with kol from the other side.

more please

really enjoyed this story so far, looking forward to reading more. Kol will be good for Bella...

plz update

I adore this. I can already tell you’re making Bella strong and I love it! I can’t wait to read more!

Really good, looking forward to seeing more

Kol will be good for her.
I imagine when they return to the living (which I’m sure they will soon) they’ll probably take out the Cullen’s and possibly the pack or at least I imagine Kol will want to do that, he is the revengeful sort.

wow this was a good second chapter I thought. That would of been strange to see yourself laying on the ground dead. I hope that the pack finds out about her death. I don't really think the Cullen's would care, because like Bella said that they left her, and Alice would of seen her get killed by Victoria. I hope no one revenges Bella so that Victoria can continue on with her life alone for her punishment for taking a human and she should of taken one of the Cullen's right.

I love this story

wow this was an interesting first chapter. Too bad Bella got killed after trying to stay away from Victoria right. I hope that her family gets the closer that they need right.