Awesome fic man. As a professional voice actor, I give this the professional voice actor seal of approval.

I can't help but notice that there's another reference in this chapter when Dewey and Webby confess they love each other on a rooftop and Donald, Beakley and Launchpad getting them on the plane kind of reminds me of the Star Wars Rebels Episode Jedi Night (Unless you haven't seen that episode then there's major spoilers so you probably get what I mean)

A Louie/Lena date, huh? Will there be any involvement for Lena with Louie's own idea of Louie Inc., since, well, that was the main story idea of Season 2 (besides Della) was his creation of Louie Inc. I can imagine Louie making Lena either his 'Vice President' or 'Secretary' for his 'schemes'.

Now this was a nice conclusion for Dewey and Webby's date!

Dewey was awesome fighting Black Heron to save Webby. That was cute the way Dewey held Webby bridal-style.

Dewey's reaction to Webby's abs were hilarious.

Dewey and Webby confessing their love for one another was heartwarming. And that kiss was romantic.

Swan Song, Donald's "lovebirds" comment, and Beakley saying she'll sleep for 100 years: LOL!

And that last fight between Webby and Dewey vs. Black Heron was amazing! I loved their combo move that really took down Black Heron! Nice touch for naming it after their favorite song. And Dewey's power was awesome!

That scene with the two of them by the pool was romantic, as was their second kiss that day. And it was funny the way Dewey pulled Webby into the water.

Nice touch with Donald and Beakley's moment at the end.

But Black Heron's still alive...

Can't wait for Louie and Lena's date!

Never thought I'd say this but the Debbigail galore is massive in this story. And seriously, they could have changed into their swimsuits first before they engage in their splash fight

Nooooo...can't you skip all this(i'm sorry if i sound rude)...because i can't wait for Della's return...and Louie being grounded(those are my favorite episodes because Louie's character is so good in them) and i can't wait to see your version of "Glomtales"

Holly mackeral, I can sense that Webby really is the Della between her and the triplets. Can't wait for more. Please keep making more chapters.

Great rewrite ya got there. I know I haven't commented before but I want you to know that I do like your series and am looking forward to future chapters especially with what Della and Louie's conflict is gonna build up to according to episodes like Kingdom DuckTales, Quack Pack, and Louie's Eleven.

I don't know way..but you make me see that maybe..just maybe Black Heron was impressed and wanted Webby to join her/FOWL..again just a thought..but that would be really cool...and maybe just maybe in Ducktales Season 3 Rewritten FOWL could manipulate Webby..

I really like the concept of Webby's parent's/dad being in FOWL...it opens up soo many possibility,since Season 3 is based of FOWL...and i read some where there was a theory that Beakley actually killed Webby's parents and that Webby isn't even related to Beakley...and when Beakley found Webby she already killed Webby's parents...One prove is that some people say that Beakley looks way to young to be a granny...and why did she kept Webby in the mansion for so long..?

anyway Love your story nwn keep up the good work...and Goodbye!

Now this was a good continuation!

Webby facing off against that Heartless was amazing! All those mpcunhed and kicks and her newfound strength really caused a lot of damage to it. And that power gave her an eight-pack! She was amazing!

Shame that Black Heron really planned for this. That Behemoth really gave her quite the injures.

Though there were some funny moments like:
1. Webby and Black Heron talking about the new lab only for the latter ti question why she's talking causally with a villain.
2. Webby: Thanks. That tickled. (beats up the Heartless)

And that Heartless design was cool too.

Dewey taking on those robots was a great touch too. Nothing will stop him from saving his love!

Donald and Beakley's moments were awesome as well! They really got this in the bag.

Can't wait for more!

What reference do you use to make this story ?

And please continue this story,iv'e been reading it from Ducktales season 1 rewritten

"Being able to scheme and see all the angles...it's the only thing that makes me feel like a part of this family. It's the only thing I'm good at." Oh man, your take on that scene with Della and Louie in Glomtales is going to kill me!

But in all honesty, I've been following your stories for quite some time, and it's always exciting to see what you come up with—both original and canon. Keep up the good work!

Damn, didn't expect an update on season 2 so fast after season 3's update. Pretty solid (and can see how Della transitioned back from being muscular in a tracksuit to being back in her usual form in the tattered pilot's outfit from her appearances in Shadow War and Last Christmas).

Also, you never credited Tress MacNeille as Daisy in Whatever Happened to Della Duck despite Daisy having one line in one of Della's flashbacks.

This is the first episodes you've written since Terror of the Terra firmians where Donald doesn't appear (obviously not Donald's first absence in the series overall of course). Not expressing opinion, just stating an observation.

Pretty good BTW.

Saw your rewrite for Friendship Hates Magic and it was pretty good as always. I notice that some of the dialogue exchanges between Louie and Webby talking about whether to trust Violet are similar to the ones they shared in Lost Harp of Mervana.
This and Meeting of the Minds are the first episodes you've written since Terror of the Terra firmians where Donald doesn't appear (obviously not Donald's first absence in the series overall of course). Not expressing opinion, just stating an observation.