This was very interesting. Hope you do another Chicago med fanfic.

More please!

Please continue this story! It’s really great! I also love the medical knowledge in the end!

It was amazing and inspirational. I hope you add to it soon!

Yes! you should definitely continue this fic its really good!

i need more!

Great writing! Please update!

First i like the premise of the chapter, secondly i absolutely appreciate the medical jargon breakdown.
Will you continue with more chapters ?

This was great, I love medical stories and to see one with completely accurate medical information was even better. I loved reading this, especially as it was an epilepsy story. I like these types of story for some reason, and collapse ones.
I’d love for you to continue this, I’d love to see more. I don’t see myself as the person though, I put in someone else, either another character or someone completely made up.
I’m having a bit of trouble writing at the moment but I like writing medical stories and I’d love it if you were able to read through my medical stories for me, once I’ve written one, and see if they are accurate. Anything I have is from the internet and the NHS website trying to get it as accurate as I can, but I’m not sure how well I’ve succeeded. I do have a couple of queries though.
One, when someone collapses or has a seizure do their pupils dilate or constrict? Two, does their pulse rate go high or low? Same for the blood pressure? Three, if the heart rate is high does the blood pressure also go high, and if the heart rate is low does the blood pressure go low?
If you can answer these for me I’d be so grateful.
Loved your story, can’t wait to see more. :) xx

The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all of the elements related to the reader like "Y/N" and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own or deviantART.

I’ve read this 3 times! It’s awesome! Continue please