I don't know what the fuck is wrong with you and wanting to fuck a Centor. This is the 2nd fic seeing you wanting to get intimate with them . I mean come on

I see a problem here common with rookie writers, pay attention to the way your dialogue goes, real people don't say each others names that much in a conversation when you write it, it feels inorganic

enjoying

Well this is officially is nonsense

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

Her name is... name.

Hrm... grumble... god dang Rusty Shackleford, hrm, grumble, god dang hocus pocus, man.
Yup
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I don't know any Rust Shackferd... And if I did, he wouldn't be part of any conspiracies! Probably infiltrating to take them down from within... Yeah!
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Most random cameo ever.

Will Harry be healed physically eventually?

Me: Oh this is going well

FatWale: 'Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn'

Me: *See the word Cthulhu* *Inhales and exhales quickley X2*
"That's shouldn't be there..."

Sorry wrong place

Personally having read otome games are tough for mobd and watching oregairu I have to say I love this kind of character and I hope to see more from this story because I can see it going to amazing heights and I can't wait to see inosuke get f-ing rekt hopefully with the next chapter we can see the buildup of the end for inosuke I thank the author for gracing us with this story and I hope issei finds a friend in the mc because he needs it thanks again for the story

Ehh... No. Seriously, up to this chapter it was an original and engaging story. And then: Hermione being in the alley at the same time, good goblins loving Potters... Cliches aside, every dialogue in this chapter felt stiff, strange and had a hint of crack, which sadly wasn't funny. I will take a break and try to read a little more, but currently I am disappointed in this chapter.

Voldemort will be the most powerful qi user if simple experiments can rapidly improve the efficiency of refinement and collection of qi. In canon he was brilliant and this seems like it would be an obsession for him.

Does that mean you can absorb the qi of other experts at refinery or foundry level as long as there isn't a negative reaction between qi types? Then you can maintain your consciousness as long as you can crush the echo of consciousness from the dead qi expert?