Great story! I love Tiva stories and ones that include their children!

If only we had been given this gem on the show

What a beautiful story. You are right; Gibbs does not need to know anything about the reunion of Tony and Ziva after the way he treated them both. I'm glad they are still in contact with Jimmy Palmer and with Tim McGee.

This was amazing. Nicely done. Words escape me with how good it was.
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Simply Wonderful! Please write more stories concerning this family.

Now that was a beautiful ending

This is very lovely ending, one of the best chapters i have read, and i admit, i had a happy tear reading this, you made the best ending.

Sad that this as ended. But that was a perfect ending. Love that souvenir they brought home, unknowingly. :)
Now the family is completely!

Thank you for this story. :)
Tiva FOREVER!

The perfect ending. I have loved this story so much.
Thank you for writing for us Tiva fans.

Thank you very much. Your novel is great. I am very glad that I read it.
I read it, I can see it before eyes, I believe in it. Perhaps this is one of the main criteria for the reader to the writer, and you have fully met it.
Your imagination allowed me to see the long-awaited "and they lived happily ever after" of my favorite characters.
As is inherent in all good books, after the epilogue there was an ambivalent feeling: I am very happy for Tony, Ziva and Tali and I don’t want to say goodbye to them, I cannot let them go.
Your inspiration has given me joy and a little light sadness.
You led Tony and Ziva to each other, away from destructive loneliness. And at the same time, did not add new misfortunes and suffering to the plot.
You were able to show what was not on the screen; give answers to many questions; help to abstract a little from everyday reality. Isn't that why we read good books?
As a reader, I am very grateful to you, and I want to hope that new interesting novels will be presented to us, the readers, by your inspiration and Your Muse.

I’m so sad this is over, but what a lovely place to end this. I loved seeing our little family, now as a family of four. You really captured Tony’s journey from the lonely man in the single bed to a family man. I hope you write more in this universe.

Oh my; this is beautiful. I am so sad this story is ending, but I loved, loved, loved it so much. Please write more stories about the DiNozzo family.

I'm not crying... love that you brought it full circle. Beautiful way to end the story.

Lovely ending Donna. Very fitting for our DiNozzo family

an excellent end here's to family