the story is great and all but until now I see you missed the wicked side of kai
even though great job this fanfiction is fantastic

the story is great and all

As a reader and a beyblade fan I would like to say that this story was amazing. It had a great deal of angst and it had the harsh reality that not everyone in the battlefield comes back unscathed and alive.
But the only thing I would like to point out is that... You tried to cram in too much in this. It was filled with a bit too much pain and sorrow - like the "Max falling into depression part," - and very few scenes that lightened the mood.
But other than that... Brilliant :) I loved this fanfic, one of the best I've ever read

sad but a damn good story, kind of a bitter sweet ending but great writing

Ok I can safely say that you are one of the best writers around here. I read this in one go. could not take my eyes off it. you managed to pump so much life into the characters, the story. it was a truly awesome experience. You are amazing. keep writing. Thank you for this. :)

Oh my god! How could you have possibly written this without bursting into tears. I feel so depressed yet content. I really 'enjoyed' reading this. If you know what I mean. It was fantastic!

This was amazing. Re-reading it after so many years...

also i wanted to say i really appreciate you keeping tala and kai as good friends. friendship is so important to me, and it was really great to see that portrayed here in this fic, for two people to have a strong bond and love each other as friends that way. thank you

It was so good

hmm. it was borderline shounen-ai for the boys. truly.

Anyway, I know this had been long overdue, but closing on my 23rd years living in this green earth, and about 10 years after the 3rd season of the original series, here I am.

There were shady places, but for old times sake that matters nil. Thank you for a good read and reacquainting me these boys that really made a big part of my childhood.

About four years ago I read this. It is finaminal. I loved this story from the beginning and cried at the end. My computer crashed and for about a year I had no internet. I lost touch of anything fanfiction related but I always remembered this story. For two years I have been looking for it and have finally found it today. I'm a freshman in high-school and for some reason I feel like I want to cry again. This is so sappy but I want you to know that this story really did change my views on life.

you know after i read this chapter i wrote a poem about it called haunted lullaby. it is on the site if you want to read it, and i put in the summary that it was about this part of your story. i look forward to reading your other stories that have been left on haitus for so long.

waaah, that was so sad. and DARK! like, REEEEALLY dark. I thought there would be a bit of love in there somewhere (cause of what Mr.D said in the earlier chapters). But i guess that would be too soon. they need to heal and live. To be under the star light together, and to be together as a team, without any outer interference pressuring them. I thought I saw a spark, but that could just be my fandom imagination (I'm a huge ReiXKai fan). I like the ending, hated how Boris and Voltaire got off easy (they should have went through PAAAAAINNN!) but like that they're dead. Nice work on the whole thing, I only saw one mistake throughout the entire thing, and that's amazing!

I am crying this is the only fanfiction to have ever done that to me! by far the sadest I've ever had a chance to read your a great writer thanks for posting!

That was like so touching. I couldn't stop reading! I read it all in one night! I loved it.

I hate you! I hate you for killing Ian! I hate you for making me bawl my eyes out at 1:30 in the morning! :'(

But I love you for writing this story! 3

Okay, time for me to go to bed and cry myself to sleep. Dx

Great story! And sorry that I'm too lazy to login.

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