Is there gonna be another part to the story where Percy returns or is he mega gone now also this is an amazing story

ahh, I enjoyed the journey through all the books in one day. I hope there will be a next

This is the third time, you killed him. So i hope that, there will be 3rd return and finally, what he really deserve.

Pertemis has ruled from the start.

Anyone notice how it dosent say complete

Holy crap, what a ride! Once again, I have to iterate right you that this has been my favorite Guardian Percy series. Great job, unique setting, and and I love the relationship building you’ve done. Happy writing!

Wowza! So much exciting new information and action! Can’t wait to see what happens next. Great job, and happy writing!

Hmmm. I’m not sure about this twist. He would need to have a really compelling argument for training then kidnapping the guardians for me to be convinced. I mean, sleeper agents would’ve made more sense if his goal is to kill the gods.

It seems to me that he’s restricted by something, but it’s unclear exactly what and for what reason he needs the guardians to lift that restriction. Hopefully, it’ll become clear sooner than later.

Amputee!Percy is a new one. Interesting for sure. I’m surprised though that Hephaestus wasn’t able to create prosthetics that could transmit the feeling of touch back through the nervous system.

Loving the twist! Can’t wait to see what you have planned for Percy following this. I love the premise this trilogy has of guardians for specific gods. This is probably my favorite Percy is gone, then returns in disguise type fic. Happy writing!

Strong chapters. I like the way you guys developed Artemis’ inner monologue. It showed the strong attachment she’s developed through beautiful prose, citing her actions and thoughts rather than simply narrating the results without the process. You have the foundation to direct it into a romantic direction if you wanted, but you could also steer away from that as well. They way you guys wrote her attachment to Percy, strong as it is, could definitely go either way.

I look forward to the next chapter.

You’ve sufficiently piqued my interest. I want to know what this final force is that has been behind the conflict of this trilogy.

Your general writing is solid as per usual. I think though that the writing tends to be stronger when you stick to one type of POV, 3rd person or 1st person, rather than switching between them.

Also, despite the rules saying that they can’t fall in love, it seems to be the case that it’s not that uncommon especially for the more flirtatious gods and goddesses. I wonder what consequences this will have; otherwise, it would’ve been pointless to introduce that rule in the first place.

Again, I’d have to recommend that you add the Percy and Artemis character tags if you want to have a greater reach. They are among the most popular tags, and this story may not even pop up in some searches by virtue of not having the Percy character tag. It’s also fairly accurate as both characters are very prominent in the entire triology you’ve set up.