its good

Good shit, mate.

The laundry thing killed the fic for me.
Sending a pathetic life form such as Saito to do it - OK. But an Angle of Death?

Under the jet-pack he has the atomic reactor which all (C)SM/AS have to power their Power Armour

I was hoping for Colbert to eat a bolter round (although an Inferno pistol is a pocket melta, innit?).
But maybe Hamael will gut him and/or Louise in the next chapters :)

Y'know there's not much fanfic about these guys, my fave unity in the blood angels. But this one shows promise, hope you don't drop this fanfic pls.

I just wanted to pop in and show support for a living story, I am sorry if some do not appreciate the story but for what it is worth, I think it is quite good.

Osmond. Not Ozpin. Crossed wires.

That's what Ozpin's masonry gets for theft from an Astartes.

Much surprise that Hamael didn't shove Louise's panties down her windpipe using his pinky finger so she could choke to death on the soiled laundry she ordered him to wash.

Drat. Emperor protects even the heretic Louise. Hamael caving her skull in would have been welcome.

Battleax is a good underutilized weapon choice.

It's alive!

Es bueno ver algo nuevo de este fic

I just wanted to let you know, you write very well. I enjoy your story, just ignore people bitching. Compared to almost every other familiar of zero/Warhammer fanfic on this site, you are miles ahead in sentence structure, engagement, cohesion, and grammar.