I hate how naru was never told that her best friend was sailor moon. Probably could have saved some headaches if she knew from the beginning. Her talk with usagi explaining the motivations of her lover and friends was pretty good. The one part I'm a bit confused was the mentioning of the butterfly effect. Assuming the effect exist in the sailor moon universe then Pluto is playing with fire allowing chibiusa to be in the past. Then again isn't it one of the taboos that no one can travel through time yet this child does it multiple times!? I sometimes hate time travel stories.

How much help does this guy needs to fix his relationship with usagi? I mean he needs the senshi, cats, best friend, mental link, and even usagi herself. He calls himself a lame ass boyfriend. He should really be calling himself single with all the crap he put usagi through. Hopefully when he gets to the docks he witness Tyler making out with usagi and then The End.
Loved the interactions that naru had with both usagi and mamoru. I enjoyed this chapter and very eager for the next.

That was very interesting. Thank you for writing that Usa, sees Mamorus point of view.

when she said stop cheating in his head

There you go. I'm not surprised naru knew the secret. Their best friends after all & she's smarter than she looks... (ω ) ~

Yeah, this got worse.
Man, is Mamoru an idiot.
Thank god Usagi has Naru there for her as a first best friend moral support wise.
Yep, the girls and Mamoru have lots of explaining, and apologizing to do.

Glad she told Naru and happy to hear that Naru already knew some of it. (honestly, what bestie wouldn't figure out the reason her friend isn't around so much anymore?) Not sure how I feel about Mamoru though. We kind of hit a soap opera moment here. lol. (that's not a diss by the way- just an observant joke)
I look forward to next week!

More!

Great chapter and sorry for the confusion. Got mixed up with your writing with the author Serena530. If you haven’t read any stories of them I would recommend or if you have the author is amazing. Personally favorite is Usagi’s Struggles. It’s amazing. Anyway I love how you wrote Naru here in this chapter. She’s super, much more understandable than the senshi. I hope Mamoru does manage to fix this mess.

Naru is such a good friend

Slipping on a banana peel...I imagine Mamoru's head turning into a donkey and releasing a "Hee-ha" as he went down...

Usually the best chapters in this story tend to be 2 characters talking with each other like mamoru/motoki and usagi/rei. However, usagi inner dialogue outshine her conversation with mamoru. It's funny she mentioned being mocked by her low grades and maybe her clumsiness. Outside of mamoru and rei, I don't think they were many instances that usagi was mocked for her klutz attacks or grades. I don't doubt that she was before she met Luna though.
I actually thought that the secret was like 2 weeks maybe 3 old. I never would have thought that's it's over a month. Reading usagi inner monologue systematically piece together everything that happened was riveting. I hope she chooses naru as the friend she goes to and not Tyler. Choosing naru will be telling everyone that she has other people she can trust and not cause misunderstandings if she choose Tyler.
Btw I liked the final scene when she found the bench to cry in. My first thought was omg it's phone booth 2.0.
I have no idea how this will resolve itself but I can't wait for the next chapter.

Maybe Mamoru should ask Usagi "What could you had done in my place?" or "If I told you the first time, what do you think you could had done?"

Ive always loved storys about them in real life no senshi. For an idea what about king of the underworld or a deamon angel flick

Yeah... I’m getting tired of the back and forth. Usagi definitely blew it out of proportion. I’m sorry but it’s way to much for this storyline. It is your story and I’m here reading it either way, but the drama needs to end. If Mamoru told Usagi about Chibi-Usa, she would have thought he wanted to get back together with her because their daughter was fading away. The storyline is getting a little unbelievable at this point. I apologize for my bluntness, but after awhile, it gets to the point where the story feels dragged out. The characters aren’t as believable as before.

I agreed that it was nice to see Usagi have a backbone now and stand up for herself but the dramatics of her relationships with her friends and boyfriend are now to the point where it’s not plausible anymore. I apologize again but that’s just my take on it.

Holy freaking shirt balls...

Ok I was expecting the blow up...but daaaaaammmmnnnn, HOW are we coming back from that?! It felt sooo final! (Just one more week...I can do this...I can wait...yea...) :(

Thanks for the update! Can’t wait to see where this is going!