Reviews for fire in the water
Guest chapter 17 . 10/19
I love it! Gwen slapped Elena lol! For real, Elena has had it coming for some time though, someone had to put her in her place. Rebekah would be so proud of her and I kind of feel that Klaus is too in that moment. Hope Bekah finds out Gwen defended her and feels guilty for drugging her. Can’t wait for the next chapter, hope Nik and Gwen make up soon and can’t wait for the Salvatore/Originals dinner scene. Hope Gwen is included in that one. It would make it even better!
xenocanaan chapter 17 . 10/15
Thank you for another fantastic chapter! I’m curious to see how closely you stickcto the original material and how far you will deviate as things go along. Personally, I hope we get some major deviation when it comes to things such as thebSalvatore brothers. I hope to read more soon!
jayanimukta chapter 17 . 10/14
Okay, I'll be honest, I'm a normal Elena hater, and I really liked Gwen. But she seriously pissed me off in this chapter. She slapped Elena and gave her this rant of hurting Rebekah's feelings, like, no Gwen does not get the freaking moral high ground. Klaus killed Jenna's aunt for the ritual, sacrificed Elena which in turn sacrificed John, attempted to run over her brother while making him take off his ring which temporarily killed Alaric, then tortured Alaric with the hybrid compelling the medics away, used Elena as his personal blood bag and just all around attempted to make everyone in Mystic Falls' life hell. Gwen only is upset with Klaus because of him not undaggering his siblings. She is on Klaus' side for everything else. She, June and Rebekah literally forced theirselves into the Salvatore's home, free of rent. And Gwen rants about what, them using her as bait and hurting Rebekah's feelings? Seriously, I adored Gwen, your story, and your viewpoints, but she really needs to grow up, at this point, Gwen is being childish. Your hate for cannon Elena is really bleeding into your story, Gwen is changing the relationships around her. This rant of hers only drove me away.
Lavendor Queen chapter 16 . 9/22
I’m so happy that Klaus and Gwen are reunited and honestly? I’m kinda pissed at Rebekah for betraying Gwen and putting her in this situation. She almost DIED! I hope Klaus gets slight revenge for that or that Gwen just doesn’t hang out with her as often or something (even though she won’t as she’s such a sweet girl). I’m so excited for Gwen and Kol though!
Guest chapter 16 . 9/22
Oh my god! She called him Dad! I love this so much. I hope she starts calling him by this title a bit more as the story progresses bc Klaus is for all intents and purposes her father. He raised her despite not being biologically his own child and adores her. I live for moments like this. I completely understand why he wouldn’t want many of his possible enemies overhearing how close their relationship and bond is. Hopefully she can call him “Dad” more in private or between the Originals family.
xenocanaan chapter 16 . 9/22
Poor Gwen! Klaus really shouldn’t have let Stefan free and I hope Damon ends up dying for what he did. I mean the entire group never once thought things through in a way that made any amount of sense. Thank you for the fantastic chapter and I can’t wait to read more!
ArtemisLuna85 chapter 16 . 9/22
Oh how I loved Gwen calling Klaus "dad." Man did I hate Damon and Elena in this chapter. Glad Elena got her arm injured and Damon almost got his heart ripped out of his chest. Poor Rebekah getting stabbed after all, she should have knocked out Elena. Anyways great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.
Guest chapter 15 . 9/3
I would love to see more Klaus/young Gwen flashbacks. It would be interesting to see the origin of how he came upon Gwen’s mother and how he decided to raise Gwen as a baby and eventually a toddler. These flashbacks you’ve shown are such beautiful and precious moments they’ve had and cherish. I love how this new version is about Klaus being a more parental/father figure to our dear Gwen. I can’t wait for her and Kol to meet. Klaus is going to be soo protective!
Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 15 . 9/2
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Guest chapter 15 . 8/31
I love this book, I find the scenes between young Gwen and Klaus so endearing and I am very glad you didn’t have her betray Klaus. Can’t wait to see how seething Klaus will be when he finds out Gwen was drugged and by Rebekah no less.
TheLadyO chapter 15 . 8/31
I'm really glad you didn't make her betray klaus. And I can't wait to see his reaction to her being drugged. With rebekah out of the picture are they going to use her with mikael anyways? Oooh! I can't wait for the next chapter!
xenocanaan chapter 15 . 8/31
Oh WOW! I was NOT expecting that change of events! I can't wait to read what comes next!
jgood27 chapter 14 . 8/21
Love this story and can't wait to read more
littlemissy3982 chapter 14 . 8/21
Beautiful story! Can’t wait for the update. I do hope you keep Gwen on Niks side, I feel like she wouldn’t betray him for something like that.
PrincessMagic chapter 12 . 8/17
aww some lovely bex and gwen bonding!
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