this so good

I'm personally a sucker for Qrow as Ruby's dad , but make as you wish. My main requestions are Leo actually having a background, true reasons to join Salem or a redemption arc and the role of JNPR's leader going to either Ren or Nora. Hoping to be helpful, see you soon.

So far pretty good introspection and dialogues with not bad fights for start, the idea is also pretty interesting.

This story is really good. I look forward to reading more when you have it written.

Thank you again for commissioning this for me, I figured it best to post a comment here as well since the reviews have been... quiet.

I'm excited to see what else is to come after this. The battle was well written. While Qrow could have taken the Nuckleave out on his own, it felt right that he let Ren have the final blow after it was disabled.

I love it