I like it, it's different and i loved that you've started off so well withthis story

I like this and where it is going! Great job! I love how you depicted that instant connection between Olivia and Fitz. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

PRAI

This is beautiful! Love Kendra’s personality!

Yes I'm enjoying this beautiful story. Hope it will continue.

Mellie is een duivel

laat die teef van Mellie gaan werken ,vrouwen moet ook werken niet wacht voor geld van zijn mannen ,en de vrouwen dat niet werken besteed meer dan andere vrouwen ,ze weten niet waar geld vandaan komt

I could picture it. You’re doing a fantastic job. Loved this chapter.

Loving the concept of this story.

First of all, I already want to cry because I can already tell this one is gonna be bitter sweet.
I am doing one comment for all 4 chaps I have read because I was impatient and had to keep scrolling. Lol. Jake working in acquisitions doing what he's doing had me laughing at that pun. And finding out Olivia's back story of so much loss... that was heartbreaking but her friend Sly is a real one. So her and Fitz's secretary would be a dynamic due and would be hilarious together.
So Mellie, the pauper with a measly $200k per year. The life of poverty is so hard. Hmm... I wonder how she will react when she realizes that the only place left for her to sleep at Pembrook Manor is on the roof? Unless she wants to make like Santa Clause a catch a mat by the chimney. Smh Lol. Trifling!
Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing :))

Love it love it. I hope she she Karen, will be able to sleep with the help of Olivia and Kendra and never have to call Mellie. This will make Mellie called all concern with Karen missing Bonnie. If she does comes she will have to stay in the house with her ex in laws. But in the meantime she will notice the attraction between the Olitz couple and she will start the trouble waters .

The message on the card was beautiful. I'm intrigue about this story. So, I hope you keep it coming. Ok, going on to the next chapter

I really hope Fitz can talk Karen out of needing Bonnie. Mellie is very close to getting her feelings hurt. I love Kendra and her bubbly personality! My heart is aching that she may not survive. This story is giving me a wide range of emotions. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Mellie is a real piece of work. She needs to stop trying to keep up with the Jones's but she wouldn't be Mellie if she did. I'm ready to punch her in the throat.

This chapter was full of emotion. I couldn't stop the tears. My heart went out to Olivia for her loss. The note Sheridan left behind was the icing on the cake. Love this story.

I just loved it and Millie is just evil paybacks are a birch and little Kendra is just so cute great job once again and I can't wait for more