I really enjoyed this story, very well written. I liked Celebrian going after what she wanted :)

That was completely and utterly made of win. I laughed so hard at the end. And it's really refreshingly lovely to find stories like this when the author has such a thorough command of the really world of a story.

A wonderful end...I loved the image at the beginning where the rose was left by a hurried hand...a very nice image...you and words are a very happy mix...the ending was well done...a tasty tale!

Aw... and they all lived happily ever after... well, maybe not, but close enough. )

~Iluvien~

LOL... oh my goodness, this chapter was hilarious! A cold indeed...

I can certainly sypmathize with Elrond's predicament. Nothing is quite as debilitating as a really bad cold _~

~Iluvien~

Wow... this is a great beginning! I'm already sad to know that this story only has three chapter... (

~Iluvien~

This story was so funny! Great humor and romance. Wonderful story.

Ah, as much as I worship Elrond, sometimes one does wish that he would get a clue. I guess, I can only repeat again how much I like the way you write Celebrian; the last scene between them is just tremendous.

A lovely ending!

A Happy Ending! But males! Aren't they hopeless sometimes? Thank Eru, Brí fixed it.

It was most interesting to see how you used Falin as a tool. First, he created conflict, but through the conflict comes a resolution which probably wouldn't have emerged that way without him.

This is simply damn good storytelling.

On the chocoloate elfie scale: 5 out of 5. ;)

Oh how funny - a cold! LOL Bet Elrond is secretly pleased to have Celebrian's company. Please update soon!

I love the description of the downpour-it makes the Last Homely House feel warmer and more homely by comparison, and makes Celebrian's overactive imagination quite understandable! And Wet!Elrond really made a lovely entrance...

*cuddles poor Ill!Elrond*

Your characterization of Celebrian-bookish and vivacious-is marvelous.

A cold! How romantic for the two of them! She can nurse the irrascible elf lord helpless in his sickbed..and..well,..this was just charming...And I love it that Celebrian cannot keep away from books

Please tell me there's more. Like, right now MORE. Beautiful, lyrical, warm, loving, fluffy, just fabulous.

A wonderful begining..each of them so careful...very very sweet

*sigh* Loved it.