| Reviews for Layers of Hell: Hazbin's Most Unwelcome Guest |
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Guest chapter 30 . 7/20 Best crossover I have ever read |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/5 Doom Slayer runs at 50 mph? Isn't that kind of slow? I mean, even Spider-Man can faster than him at around 200 mph (comics). |
col. reader chapter 31 . 7/3 Great job for fixing the Final Phase. I like this version more as a proper ending for this story. |
Rando chapter 30 . 7/3 I liked it! It was great at first, lost me half way but then you reeled me back in...Overall, it was nice! |
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 31 . 7/1 Cant wait for tomorrow! |
Slimjim77 chapter 8 . 7/1 oof, cliff hanger |
Slimjim77 chapter 3 . 7/1 Noice, gave me the chuckles |
adventurefan2020 chapter 30 . 6/30 Dude, that was one hell of a story and I loved it! OMG the writing was some of the best I have ever read in fan . I not only added your story to my favorite list but your the first author I ever followed. So keep doing your best and cant wait to read more of your stories. Have a great day. |
Guest chapter 30 . 6/30 This story was awesome and I can’t wait for the sequel to come out. No rush though. Take care. |
Guest chapter 30 . 6/27 Col. reader, the Imperium would even attack Heaven because God is not the Emperor and Heaven's citizens are implied to also have animal features so they could be mistaken for Abhumans. |
Caddy chapter 30 . 6/26 I wish you well on your future projects. Loved the story by the way. |
col. reader chapter 30 . 6/24 And we're finish! For 6 months containing 30 chapters you finally completed this story. You should feel proud of yourself, not many authors were able to finish their fics in this website most of the time. Now let's review this story as a whole: This was a great story. For whole 30 chapters you've captured all of the characters personalities and their way of thinking as they journeyed through the uncharted lands. You showcased the unending rage and brutality of Doom slayer in an excellent way while the rest were no pushover either, even though they felt like playing on ultra-nightmare. They were still trying their damndest way to survive through well coordinated attacks under Hayden. However the ending felt like rushed. I was kinda expecting the last chapter to be more lenghtier so as to wrap things up. Instead DS and the UAC seems to be on a rush, leaving more questions and uncertainties. Next is the fight between Doom slayer and the Icon of Sin. It was underwhelming. I was hoping it to be an epic showdown that culminates all of the build ups from previous chapters to this final confrontation. Instead we only see Doomguy bashing that big skull like an angry gorilla. It felt like very anti-climactic because of it. Then the biggest crime here is that you could have let him use his crucible since you're planning to let Hayden hand over his sword anyway. But now that this story ended. Let's move on and see the future. Now, it's fine for us that you're gonna focus on your other stories. It's better to complete them too. That way you'll have a fresh mind once you go back to this crossover. But please DON'T let us wait for a long time. This also applies on your other works too because you're really gonna lose alot of readers if you let them wait for a month more, however I didn't say that you take this as a priority. Always value your life and health because we don't want you to die for this website. Speaking of crossovers. With your announcement on turning this into triple crossover. Well I'm gonna say that its your choice to do it or not. I agree with the other reviewer though but I'm not going to stop your creativity. However you might want to listen to us veterans for a bit. I've been reading fanfics for 4 years and I tell you what. Most of the massive crossover fics always end up pretty badly. The biggest issue for these stories is that when a new fandom enters in an already crossover fic, they tend to steal the spotlight from the characters of previous fandoms if poorly handled, the fights scenes get shorten and the character development diminishes. It gets worse when the story narrative end up in a dead end and be left incomplete because of lost of interest. Now I still acknowledge that there are some massive crossovers that were done perfectly (although most of them can be found in other websites). Now if you want to continue that plan, make sure that you have a large amount of stamina and patience. This is one of the problems why many authors left them unfinished because of brain exshaustion, after that they'll lose interest. Make sure that everything is perfeclty balance in narrative because one mistake and might go downhill for that. And now with the 40k as your choosing, I'm quite skeptical about it because we know their nature and realistically speaking the Emperium will definitely leave no quarter for the people in Hazbin universe giving the fact that they're demons. So what's the short answer? I'll say if you want a safe passage then its better to just leave this series into two fandoms only but if you're bold enough then go ahead. The more riskier, the better its prizes. Now, at the end of the day its your choice to do what you write. We're readers and we read your work. So for now thank you for giving us a nice story and we can't wait for the new sequel. |
ThatSpaceMann2 chapter 2 . 6/23 Ah... I see what you did there. Spongebob reference. |
NaturalBornK chapter 30 . 6/23 Congratulations Man. You should be very proud of yourself for seeing this through, and I can't wait to see the sequel. So in the meantime, I'll be sure to check out your other works. P.S. Be safe. |
white1498 chapter 29 . 6/22 Very good, I look forward to the sequel. |