Reviews for Pokémon Best Wishes: An Alternate Story (Hilda Joins Ash)
rufus264 chapter 30 . 6/29
Great chapter
Guest chapter 29 . 6/22
Can you have Hilda and ash end up together please they make a cute couple and it's rare there even paired up together and great job on the story so far
Jessica sucks Austin's cock chapter 1 . 5/11
AshXMay rocks you moron
Guest chapter 14 . 3/8
Awesome chapter as always keep up the good work and not sure when but sooner or later ash should try asking Hilda out on a date because it's obvious those two like each other and it is rare seeing Hilda and ash paring from what I've noticed
Guest chapter 8 . 1/27
As good as the chapter is the one problem is that the texts are to close together can you please fix that some of your other chapters are far apart from each other and makes it easier to read so can you do that for this chapter please
rufus264 chapter 7 . 1/19
Great stuff
rufus264 chapter 6 . 1/13
Great chapter
Pokemon fan chapter 4 . 12/29/2019
Have ash bring back his older Pokemon he used from previous regions not just unova region Pokemon like in the anime
rufus264 chapter 2 . 12/15/2019
Great chapter
rufus264 chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
Great start
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
I forgot to mention in my last review u should put ash and Hilda names in the summary because it will be difficult for readers to find this story if their trying to search for it without the characters in the summary of your story once the characters names are in the summary it will be alot easier for the readers to find this story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
Will Rosa be in this story to since she's the female protagonist from black and white 2 Pokemon games if she is have her be one of ashs campaigns to because it's very rare seeing them in the same story to and for a possible paring have it be ash x Hilda or ash x Rosa it's rare seeing them but even rarer seeing ash x Rosa and for a possible 3 campaign have it be Brock because he's not only an old traveling campaign of ash but he can help teach Hilda and possibly Rosa what he knows from his experiences from traveling with ash to help them become better Pokemon trainers same goes for ash he can help them to in his own way
True Master chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
Will Ash capture the female snivy?
Cause she was one of my favorite Pokemon from best wishes and I wished she evolved into Serperior