Yet again, another amazing chapter! I always get excited when the next chapter is out! Wish I found this a little bit later on so there is more chapters to read, I don't know if it's just me, but when a new chapter comes out, I don't want it to end or there to be more, maybe that's just me. The reactions are great so far! I wonder what will happen next for their reactions, also can't wait to see what everyone thinks about Weiss's and Six's greed getting the best of them. Still can't wait until they react to Jaune's and Pyrrha's sex tape, that is going to be hilarious! Keep up the great work man! Hope you enjoy your vacation/break. :)

And thus, the audience now realizes the world sucks, I wonder how Sienna will like the fate of the fallen Elder, I'm sure the little Huntsmen in training would be appalled that they leave an old man to starve and die, but glad he's dealt with. Sienna and Neo would probably see it as just desserts. Excellent chapter, hope to read more soon.

Awesome chapter.

No... eh vacation is vacation. No point in complaining. Right, so good chapter over all. I wonder how Blake will handle Weiss going crazy with greed. Enjoy you month off.

God, this Gala event thing gives me the Dark Carnival L4D2 vibes. It's the midnight riders~

I'm suddenly inspired to write a weird SAO-type situation where the RWBY characters are trapped in L4D2, oh my.

Anyhow, I'm currently going through a rewrite, Avery's orders. He wants to use my vessel as well as a few others for it.

So...no more Union or Combine, now it's some suicidal immortal who's been 'blessed'.

Yeah, it's weird. Anyways, good chapter and keep up the good work!

Awesomeness

Question when did sun neo and sienna get there?

Amazing reactions to the story so far! The only bad things I can say is, that certain words need to be spelled properly, like when Neo "jesters" it should be "gestures" not "jesters." And there are a few others as well, but other than that, doing good so far.
Can't wait to see their reactions to: meeting everyone else, Jaune and Pyrrha having sex, finding out Pyrrha is pregnant, Ren and Nora having sex and how Nora reacts when Ren says "i love you too." How Yang reacts to losing her hair, how everyone reacts to Sierra being in the divide and how they react to Cinders plan and how they find out Penny is a robot, how Six becomes everyones father and the biggest one, how everyone reacts to Weiss's brain. Can't wait to see all of this!

I can see thier reaction to blue mountain where weiss mind with the latex gimp suits that would be funny and yang tease weiss dirty mind.

I was gonna say Another One Bites the Dust, but I think I'll let Freddie Mercury have his peace. So now that Weiss gets to see that she's been through the blender, I can imagine that reaction Weiss is gonna be a little uneasy right now. Just wait till she gets outed as Rubysexual. That whiterose scene will be hilarious. I bet Neo is enjoying seeing our hero's do some cold blooded killing. Does Velvet still have her camera, she hasn't been taking bunches of pictures of all the weapons recently.
Excellent chapter, hope to read more soon.

Awesome chapter.
Ghost people are worse enemies in game.

Well forgot Weiss had no collar. Didn't patch attention to this part of the og story, if I'm being honest. XD

Though it positive that Weiss in a slave collar would be cathartic irony for all Faunus present. XD

Well, that took a good thirty minutes to read.

My Perfectionism is yelling, the title is triggering it. Oh noes.

I see that the grammar has been fixed, although spelling and missing commas are still present.

'Jester' should be 'gestures'...That's all the fixing that I could remember, so yeh.

Also, thanks for the help with the Attack Moon, I would've used the Dyson Sphere I hid (For the worse case scenario of the meeting being a bust) to shoot off a beam, but chances of friendly fire was high so I didn't do it.

Awesomeness

This was one long ass chapter. Again, sorry about it but hey that’s life.

Speaking of which, couldn’t help but notice a few changes to the script. Guessing that’s Snowballs work?

Heh, you know it’s amusing to see Weiss like this. From riches to rags. Pretty sure she’s going to question why she becomes a chain smoker next chapter.

Anyways sorry again about the long chapter but look on the bright side three back to back chapters will be fairly short coming up. Also if you see your sister, tell her sorry but the idea of her in a Dick gracin costume was too good to pass up.