| Reviews for Picking up the Pieces |
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Shian1998 chapter 28 . 7/24 Enjoyed this first scene of the third part of this trilogy! Glad Blue and Echo seem to have stopped fighting, and that their fights didn't escalate as much as Owen and Barry worried they would. Happy that Owen and Barry got that schedule figured out, and that Owen is able to see Claire more regularly now. Happy that Olive and Grape are going well so far. Hope those two will still end up being okay, whether as an attraction or not. Liking how Parker is being much better than Hoskins was, and that Owen doesn't have to worry about that man again. Quite interested by the idea that Parker brought up, and agreed with Owen that it's something to get behind. Curious to know what Owen will decide about this. Enjoyed this beginning scene! Going to read the rest of the chapter now. |
RooftopsandSwingsets chapter 27 . 6/5 Thank you for this story! Really loved it! However waiting a week felt like forever it’s like watching a tv show and waiting for the next episode every time! Hahahaha |
Shian1998 chapter 27 . 6/5 Great epilogue! Enjoyed Claire and Owen's conversation here. Loved how they agreed that they both need to get better with scheduling and delegating their jobs, and that they need to find ways to see each other more. Should be somewhat easier now that Hoskins is out of their way. Glad the raptors so far don't seem to be at risk of getting put down. Interesting that there were more raptors on the way towards hatching. Hope Parker would've been reasonable when Owen went to talk with him about how to manage it all. Enjoyed their moment at the end. Great ending to this story! And excellent job with this story! Really enjoyed it! Looking forward to all the different fics you're working on. :) |
DarthFlores chapter 27 . 6/5 Great ending. |
Guest chapter 27 . 6/5 I love that this was longer than you planned for! Honestly I wish it’d never end |
guest chapter 26 . 6/4 Hi! I absolutely love your story - it's definitely helped alot through the pandemic and life in general. definitely a bright spot to my week and a great escape from reality. thank you for writing. I hope you continue to write my owen/claire stories! Thank you! 3 |
ShanteRenee chapter 26 . 6/1 Awww. This was SO perfect. I cannot wait for the epilogue! |
Shian1998 chapter 26 . 5/31 Great final chapter! Enjoyed it! Glad they're all back home now, and that Owen is recovering. Happy that Blue has reunited with Charlie and Echo, and that they all seem fine together now despite some initial fighting. Loved when Owen interacted with the three raptors. Enjoyed his and Claire's reunion with Barry and Zia. Agreed with Owen that I wish I could've seen Hoskins and Henry being taken away in handcuffs. Glad they and Eli will definitely be facing justice, as those charges Claire listed, particularly the attempted murder, will likely have them in prison for a long time. Hope those other dinosaurs end up being okay, and that the eggs don't have more monsters in them. Curious to know what will happen with the raptors. Enjoyed the moment between the two at the end. Great chapter! Looking forward to the epilogue and the update! |
ShanteRenee chapter 25 . 5/24 I'm so glad Owen is okay. I literally had anxiety as I waited for Owen to wake up. I was like "OMG, He's STILL asleep!?" But I get it. But STILL! haha. You are SUCH a great writer. I love it! I hope you have a few more stories up your sleeve. I need my weekly fix! :) Thank you so much for continuing to write. it really helps me get through my week, and I look forward to reading your stuff. It's apart of my ROUTINE! seriously. Thank you. |
Shian1998 chapter 25 . 5/21 Another great chapter! Glad it was the police that arrived, and not more of Eli's people. Wonder who or what tipped off the police to check the basement. Relieved that they didn't kill Blue, and that she and Owen both got medical attention and will be fine. Good that Claire was released by the police as soon as Benjamin confirmed who she was, and that she and Owen told them everything that happened (hope their statements included the details about Henry and Hoskins). Enjoyed the moment they shared by the end. :) Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one! Hope it explains what happens to the guilty parties. |
ShanteRenee chapter 24 . 5/18 ahhh omg. I hope Owen's gunna be okay! And I really hope it's Lockwood and not Maisie. That would be even worse. Ugh. I cannot WAIT until next week! Amazing, as always! |
Shian1998 chapter 24 . 5/15 Another great chapter! Damn it Maisie, blabbing on Owen. Though it's not her fault, as she doesn't know Owen here and probably thought it was a burglar or something. Glad Owen wound up with Claire and Blue, and that they've confirmed both Hoskins' and Henry's treachery. Go whoever let them out of the cells (hoping it was Maisie). Worried about Owen's condition, hope he'll be okay. Glad that guard didn't have it in him to murder them. Big cliffhanger there, the elevator interrupting Claire and Eli's standoff. Excited to know who it is. :) Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one! |
Anony chapter 24 . 5/14 The suspense! Can’t wait to read more! |
bon chapter 24 . 5/14 That's a horrible place to leave a chapter! I hate cliffhangers! Wonderful update, guess we'll see what happens next week. |
ShanteRenee chapter 23 . 5/13 I've heard of / used the term 'yeea tall' before! AND OMG! I can't believe they got Owen too! Now their only hope is Zara! She'll raise the alarm that something is wrong when she hasn't heard from Owen...right?! RIGHT!? haha. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm literally on the edge of my seat with anticipation! I also want to read the unrelated short fic of yours too! But I bet you already knew that. :) We are starting to reopen (slowly) as well. Good luck for you guys in Canada! |