Reviews for Knight of Rebellion
TheLostArchivist chapter 6 . 7/27
Awww, that's just adorable.

I'm going to look forward to the kind of utter absurdity that happens now, by the way. Coil was terrifying with Dinah's aid, but how much more fun are the Undersiders going to be now that _they_ have her help instead (and aren't evil sociopaths)? Muahahaha...

(Alec doesn't count because he's at worst a Neutral sociopath. The more you know. :D)
DareusX chapter 6 . 7/10
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Need more of this
jukehero461 chapter 6 . 7/6
Yes. All the yes. Favorite thing I've read today.
dw6fanmanxd chapter 1 . 7/5
First chapter and i see the words dick waffle. (im so stealing that lmao) keep up the good work. these fics are amazing
Ninja6345 chapter 6 . 7/4
I love it.
WearyCurmudgeon chapter 6 . 7/4
- A Rose by any other name.
*Also I was thinking Lisa was going to bestow Dinah with the cape name 'Foresight,' since Taylor vetoed 'Smug Brat.'*

Name definitely works, although I do have to point out that it does bring about a slight tonal shift in the relationship between the three, from sisters to potential surrogate mothers and daughter.

Eye of the Mind (both versions) can be likened to precognition at high enough rank. And when Lisa rebrands she often picks the name "Insight".

So Dinah as "Foresight" could be likened to be their "daughter". Appropriate as merging the nuclei of two ova will always result in female offspring (not counting the rare occurrence of Genetic Chimerism, where a female could be carrying a Y chromosome, but that's another kettle of fish).
Djberneman chapter 6 . 7/1
Wow. Dinah can be a relationship expert. Just ask her the chances of having a happy marriage that does not end in divorce and she could make millions.
CyberDragonEX chapter 6 . 7/1
I LIKE this version of Dinah. Between the snarky brat in this chapter, and the way she thought during chapter four, she is just priceless.

So, on a SEMI-related note, I had an idea for Clarent as a Noble Phantasm... though I doubt Taydred would be able to use it. I read somewhere that Clarent was originially a Ceremonial Sword, meant for use in the Knighting Ceremony - then Mordred stole it and used it as an ACTUAL weapon.

Now -and again, I highly doubt Taydred could use it as such- I was thinking that Clarent could, in its role as a Ceremonial Sword of Knighting, be able to empower others. We already know from FSN's Caster that it is possible to empower a mortal to fight on the level of a Servant, and from the Noble Phantasm of Zero's Berserker that it's possible to transform mundane items INTO noble phantasms.

So, in its Role as a Ceremonial Sword of Knighting, I was thinking that Clarent COULD be used to transform others into False Servants - Basically, they'd gain Servant stats relative to what they had as non-Servants (someone really weak and frail would have E-Rank Strength and Durability, while an Olympic Weight lifter would have A-Rank strength). Similarly, any skills they possessed would ALSO be converted into Servant Skills... and while most people lack anything that could count as a Noble Phantasm, those that DID have such a thing WOULD have it be empowered (in the case of Worm, most powers). The only limitation would be that the power/blessing would be bound to the oath they swore when being 'Knighted' - they break the oath, they lose the powers.

Now, I repeat for the third time, I HIGHLY doubt Taydred could use Clarent in such a manor... but if you WANTED to use it, feel free.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/30
Looking forward to the next chapter
Tererdrone chapter 6 . 6/30
hahhaha loved that ending
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 6 . 6/30
Awwww.

Love it, can't wait to see more.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/30
Falls over giggling
Aracade chapter 6 . 6/30
Dinah, love bug. Will accept 10 dollars, ice cream, or a slice of cake as payment.

Course now Coil is in deep shit because there is now even more reason to unless righteous angry knight rage on his ass.
osterreicher97 chapter 6 . 6/30
Lol, surprise Taydred!
dreaddragonknight chapter 6 . 6/30
the power of children calling you out on shit and teenagers being dumb for hormone reasons... perfect
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