Reviews for Pierced Hearts
Tenebris.Rosis chapter 46 . 6/20
And I'm done! Thank you so much for giving this story another chance! I really enjoyed your representation of Hans and Elsa and their relationship. As a fellow Catholic, I thank you for this story and for standing true towards our faith. It was beautiful, and it really reminded me of Lewis Screwtape Letters sometime. Keep going forward! May our Mother always keep you under her mantle!
lenaval chapter 46 . 4/29
At first I was quite intimidated by the long chapters. But this is amazing! It has everything I never thought I need from a fanfic... A good amount of action, adventure, angst, drama, romance. And I just love how this story has a lot of lessons in it. Thank you for making this.
Zucchini chapter 46 . 4/19
“That was epic!” Such a fabulous story. Did I detect a weaving of the Once Upon a Time storyline? Well done!
Tenebris.Rosis chapter 1 . 3/29
OMG! I decided to check just in case now after I just sent you a PM and now I see you reposted it and I'm exhilarated! As a Roman Catholic with OCD and scrupulosity in other areas I completely understand you and feel you for what you went through, as I went through the same thing. Thank you so much for this, and if you ever need to talk with a fellow Catholic with a similar problem in the fanfiction world, I'm here!
MayaTL chapter 46 . 3/11
I read this whole story in one night, and the epilogue moved me to tears. I will treasure this work forever. Thank you, for gifting it to us.
Yeyeye chapter 45 . 2/21
As an avid fanfic reader (and new Helsa shipper), that was amazing! As a fellow Christian seeing the religious connections and references? Even better!

Never before have I read a story full of connections with Christianity, even using teachings to help build on a tale and in a way act as a part of the big solution to the conflict. I want to shower you with a bunch of kudos for working with two beliefs that exist in the story!

The development is also nice!
. . . Ah, and I don’t know what else to say—as I have a lot more to add—but well done! I am honestly glad you decided to bring this back, though I never knew since it’s only now that I decided to do a more thorough look through Frozen’s fandom (not long after watching the second movie). Then there’s that one part of me that thinks I got the information wrong, since I have a tendency to jump from story to story. Well, anyway, this was a very nice read! :D
LilliannaStone chapter 46 . 1/29
Words cannot express how beautiful, magical, and satisfying this story was. Thank you for doing these characters justice and helping me believe in the power of forgiveness again. I was so happy reading the end, but it was bittersweet to finish the last chapter.
6She6Devil6 chapter 46 . 1/22
I’m sorry but it was a cringefest everytime a song appeared. I had to skip past all of them.
sadistic lunatic chapter 46 . 1/17
Wow. Just, simply, wow! Lordy, I wish someone would animate this wonderful story! Thank you for writing this wonderful tale!

I love how fully fleshed out all the characters were- even the Snow Queen, despite her mostly lurking in the shadows during the early half of this story. My only gripe is that I couldn't identify some of the songs, so I couldn't sing them in my head while reading.

My favorite part, apart from the Helsa developments, was definitely the character growth. You did an amazing job with the cast. The one part I do wish we could have had more of was the cute little fire ball, Ovn.

Regardless, thank you, again!
SometimeSomeday chapter 1 . 1/13
OHMYFREAKINGBLOB! You're making me cry T-T! I was one of those people who kept looking for Pierced Hearts for several years because I really wanted to read it again. I kept searching for this but to no avail. Until I've decided to open fanfiction again and VIOLA! I saw a story mentioning PIERCED HEARTS. I opened it, peeked at the author's profile, and BAAM! This really is THE Pierced Hearts! I'm so estatic! I'm going to re-read this! Thank you so so much!
usualguest chapter 46 . 1/8
The epilogue was so sweet. The previous chapter was amazing. Hans' embarrassment during the talk of his act of true love was funny. I liked they got back their special powers and Hans showing compassion, forgiveness and giving second chances to his brothers and mostly Agnar.
Thank you so much for sharing for a second time your excellent story with the intriguing plot and great characters. It was a pleasure reading it again.
Arachnerd217 chapter 46 . 1/3
Revisiting this story has been one of the greatest joys I've had this past month. Thank you for reposting it and re-editing it. The epilogue nearly made me shed a tear.

There's a part of me that almost, ALMOST, wants to read a sequel of some sorts or a one-shot taking place after Chapter 43 but before the epilogue, but I wouldn't want to force the idea into your head if you're truly finished with the universe.

As you've said in your various author notes, Pax et Bonum and I'll be on the lookout for any future stories you'll write.
Guest chapter 46 . 1/2
Thank you for the good story and I hope you have a very good year.
ItsaBell chapter 46 . 1/2
Wow!

Thank you so much!
Nattles18 chapter 46 . 1/2
Wow...that epilogue was so bittersweet and a real tear jerker. I forgot how emotional this was. As for the chapter before this one, I loved the additional scenes, as they gave a real sense of closure for all the characters.
You truly are an amazing writer. Please continue on with your passion and I hope to read other work from you soon.
Finally, for the hundredth time, thank you for reposting this story. It is one that I'll always come back to every Christmas time:)
God Bless you and keep writing!
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