Reviews for Multi-verse Theories: No Smoke, No Fire
salports779 chapter 4 . 3/30
Can you please continue with chances ?
northwind132 chapter 5 . 3/7
I like this idea. Especially having shadow pokemon in Galar, it just sounds so interesting.
DemonicLightning chapter 4 . 2/20
I love your stories. I hope you enjoy writing as much as I enjoy reading them. Thank you for sharing your stories, they're wonderful~
tonyalexander13 chapter 2 . 2/20
Please make a part 2 of this story!
sesshyluhvr chapter 3 . 2/20
Um wow, first I love how connected this is
Second, is it just a oneshot, because I would read this no matter the chapter lengths, which fyi, I LOVE this chapter!
Iliked the previous two but darn, this chapter has occupied my mind, I can't even remember the story I read before finding these lovely ideas!
Rake1810 chapter 5 . 2/19
Excellent chapter
Firehedgehog chapter 5 . 2/19
niice
Ri2 chapter 4 . 2/18
Poor kid.

What's this about Alain and Diantha?

And Sycamore as Ash's dad...that's a new one.
Rake1810 chapter 4 . 2/17
Another excellent chapter.
YuriCrystalMoonlight chapter 3 . 12/8/2019
Love this one! Hope you continue it.
il2swim57 chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
I really loved this prompt! It felt so organic (besides all of Josie’s Pokémon being shiny) and down to earth, the characters relationships with each other feel real and lack that artificial feeling that usually comes with retelling the anime with slight differences. I especially enjoyed the fact that while Josie is grieving over her lost friend she still can think about other things and not let it completely consume her like you see in 90% of fanfics involving the death of loved ones. I’ve been reading your other fic “To Repair With Gold” since it reached the 20,000 word mark and I can see the writing style you developed from it make an appearance in this work as well. I’m not going to try to pester you to continue on with this plot bunny if you don’t care about it now that it’s out of your head, but I can easily see myself reading the rest of the story if you ever decide to create an official story off of this.